All Comments on 'On The Prowl'

i like stories like this. the characters start out mysterious and in the end, they're actually already together. i like the passion between the two. good job. :)

this was good i liked it u should make a part2

that was so hot. reminds me of myself and my husband. we see each other and the flames start.

I really enjoyed your story.

I REALLY liked this. The clever twist at the end was very awesome!

The ending was terrific, but it still would have been a hell of a tale, if they were just two horny strangers.

Got me off guard with that sweet plot twist ,short but well written as well. Romance .

Have seen this twist at the end many times ... but it always gets me. Good read.