All Comments on 'On The Rebound'

Numerous spelling/punctuation errors that should be caught by a conscientious editor - a good story such as this deserves a good editor. Find one.

Excellent story.

Keep writing.

Which would have been made even better with a little more attention to detail. I know it's easy to become 'carried away' when you're writing erotica and the words are streaming from your keyboard, but when that is done, your hard work is just beginning.

Careful attention to grammar and spelling, although not an awful lot of fun, can make a good story an excellent one.

4 *s for a great effort. May I suggest you find someone to proof your scripts for you? We never make a very good job when we do it ourselves.

Thank you and please keep writing.

I enjoyed this submission on many levels. But what I enjoyed most about it was the author's understanding, that in a true BDSM relationship, it is ultimately the sub that actually has the power, by surrendering to total control. PLEASE continue to write more!!

Just outstanding!

How about two or three more maybe four?. WHAT THE HELL ONE A WEEK PLEASE!!!!!!! THANKS FOR A GREAT READ!!

Reminiscent of your earlier work - Good, very good

If he is indeed a professional writer with a live in proof reader, why are there so many errors?

to be in either, probably as switches. super hawt story, got my blood flowing

ZEROZEROZERO.... Did not even finish the first page...

EXCELLENT!!!

Congratulations on a great read, I really enjoyed the fun and games between these two.