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All Comments on 'On the Run Pt. 01'

by cvillerook

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happymuffinhappymuffinalmost 6 years ago
Wow

This is a great start a bit short and rushed but still great!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
GOOD OPENING CHAPTER

I'll look at a more if you set them up here.

Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

to short but good

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
pointless

what was the point in writing something so short. will they get it on in chapter 10 or paragraph 20?

chytownchytownalmost 6 years ago
***

Waiting for Pt. 02

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
FFS...

...work on your spelling!

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