All Comments on 'Once in a While Ch. 02'

Myles has the best of both worlds. He has a good life with a life partner, one that can never be duplicated with the other life that he has discovered. A family. That should never be diminished. I don’t want to see anything happen to that, please. This has been an erotic story, and fulfilling for Myles. Maybe it should just end as a fling that he will always treasure. Hmmmm?

While stories have a life of their own I think it's safe to say that Myles is not leaving family. Past that I'm not totally sure where it's going. That part of writing has been an eye opener.

... which I find wonderful! 5 stars.

Especially like the dominant commentary by Julian. Really heightens the submissiveness of Miles.

Really enjoying this series. Apart from the glorious sex, the fact is adultery & guilt heightens the story line. Let's face it, guilt can make sex even more exhilarating as emotions struggle with one another. Sex without any tension can be rather bland. You have managed to convey the turmoil of Myles' lust versus guilt with genuine realism - extremely sexy. Look forward to more

This story was good. You should do a third but add in more masculine and verbal guys.

This is so good what a great story so erotic The way you tell how everyone is feeling about the sex they are having how Miles is changing and being so submissive. I luv it. I need more to see how this goes.