All Comments on 'One Big, Happy Family Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Second chapter

Man, you definitely should write the second chapter of this serie! That's a good perspective of the pleasure and pure incestual lust felt by an recently self discovered slave! I would like to read some more development on it. There's a lot potential on the plot you created. Even by the title of it, "One Big, Happy Family" we expect that more members may be added to the action and how...

The way you put it to words really gave me a huge hard on. You definitely should write the second chapter of this serie!

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I write very amateurish fantasy for my own amusement and hopefully for others. I am strictly a two-fingered typist, so stories take hours to complete and sometimes finish due to cramping, resulting in careless editing and sudden stops. I attempt to present views from bo...

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