All Comments on 'One Hell of a One Off'

Is the first kid Al’s?

Loved the Grateful Dead chapter titles.

There were a few typos, but overall it was an excellent story told with excellent writing. As a meat-beater, not so much, for me, anyway, but still an excellent story. Twenty-five star points.

Im not usually one for romance, and I'm a woman even, but this was amazing. Had me thinking of my own s/o and fantasising about a similar weekend. ;)

until Al asked her to marry himin the middle of the gangbang. Just not credible,nor the resulting success of their film, books etc. Kardashians are one in a billion, and led by a fierce mama bear. Bldg a brand off porn and transforming into wholesome motherhood would never work, the questions would continue, judgement would reign supreme, if only to make the judge's feel better about their lives.