by PointSix
Ive really enjoyed this series. Ally and Sarah are are so cute together.
The sex scene was hot hot. I am happy for it to be left there with them filing for a relationship. Dont misunderstand me i could read about these two and what they get up to in their special training sessions all day long.
I do however wish you to keep writting , hopefully in the lesbian category.
Where you could introduce us to another cute pair ?
Thank you
You are a very good writer, I can almost see Ally and Sarah laying naked in bed spooning each other, I will miss them and I hope to read more stories from you
Will miss these two. Hopefully, in the future they will return. I am looking forward to seeing more stories from you. Enjoyed your writing.
A beautiful story, well written and engaging from beguiling to end, or is it the end? I hope you continue writing these stories and I can’t help feel this pair real potential for further developments. Thank you, in advance.
This has the makings of a great military sci-fi, action adventure. They infiltrate the home planet of the bad guys, discover the great secret. Now all they have to do is to steal a shuttle and make it back alive to save the confederation. Did I mention one is shot along the way and we’re left to wonder if she makes it?
Please, seriously think about it. I would pay money to read that.
Great character development...would like to see the relationship develop further.