All Comments on 'One Man's Fantasy Ch. 01'

Way to go Bob. Most of your stories are enjoyable, but this one is beginning to appear to be your best ever. Anxiously, I await future episodes with no expectations except to be entertained!

One of the very best: you are a WRITER! Surely your talents are worthy of a wider audience than Literotica's.

JPB, I have read many of your stories, liked many of them, but somehow this one just seems to be something really cool. I really look forward to your next parts. This part was a very nice set up and really just has the feel of a special story.

the ending is so bad... it is well shocking. Its clear that JPB wanted an ending that is really comes out of left field ... and it really ruins this story

Nice work Bob. The story is enjoyable from beginning to the continuation. You have left many intriguing possibilities for your story. I am truly looking forward to the ensuing chapters.

what and exciting story. can't wait for the next part.

A Great read for sure .... can't wait for the continuation and all that I'm sure it will offer!

It was recently posted on the storiesonline.net, and, well, I did NOT like the ending.

It was good until you put him back with the slut wife. No way in hell. She is trash. She committed adultry, cheated, basically lied, took bareback sex, humiliated her husband on many levels, and in no way felt any remorse for her actions. It was a planned and deliberate act of unfaithfulness in her husbands bed. Sorry not a chance in hell.

I haven't read SOL to see what's really happening; I've only read this part. Just an observation or two. Firstly, we never learned if Annalise gave the engagement ring back to Rob. Did she, or didn't she? Maybe it was in there somewhere and I missed it, but I don't think so. Secondly, I can't fathom any reason why a man who believes in fidelity would want to have a series of dates with a porn star who has been in the sack with God knows how many men. I suppose anyone is entitled to a fantasy but most of the time, a fantasy is way better than the reality -- in fact, reality can spoil a fantasy, so why do this? Well-written so far and I'm enjoying the flow -- I'm interested in seeing what's next.

<p>So far it was very good and I really liked it<p/><p>I'd really appreciate if people who already read this story <b>STOP<b/>revealing the end<p/>

This installment is great. I loved the lead-up to the main theme. Let's wait and see what the end looks like on this site before we criticize JPB, okay. Maybe he changed it from a previous posting on a different web site.

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My Redhead was a fantastic story about a husband that didn't know his wife was having an affair and one day she told him to find a girl friend because they had not been having sex. The wife kept after the husband until he finally made up someone he found and was having sex with but in reality he wasn't because he could not cheat on her. He continues to tell his wife of the wonderful sex he is having with his made for woman and one day she decides to tell him she has been having an affair for two years. I've read most of your stories but this is one that I would like to see another chapter which he deals with the knowledge that has been thrust upon him by his cheating wife. This is a extremely creative and original tale and I think only you could do it justice with another chapter on how the husband handles this unexpected and totally unknown information spoken from his (until now) faithful wife. I hope that you will give this some thought as I'm sure there are others that would like to see how he responds to this crushing knowledge. Thanks for writing and sharing. Yoda

Only 1% of cocks are equal to or greater than 8". Even John Holmes was only 8.75". Since the story is impossible, instead of 5***** I rated it 3***.

The idea that women prefer larger than normal cocks is preposterous and contrary to evolution and logic. Humans have evolved so the average size (slightly less than 6 inches) is best.

First an excited vagina is only 4 inches so any cock longer than 4 inches will fill it complete. However, the vagina is designed to accommodate most cocks. That is, a vagina will stretch 150 or 175 percent. It will even stretch up to 200 percent to accommodate the 1% of cocks that are about 8 inches provided the woman is properly excited and the cock is very slowly inserted. However, the 1 in 10,000 larger cocks if fully inserted would result in injury by stretching the vagina past its yield point. Although over a period of several months, the vagina could be stretched further.

Second and primary, if women preferred larger cocks, that would give men with longer than normal cocks a huge evolutionary advantage resulting in larger cocks being the norm. Even a 1% per generation advantage (i.e., men with larger cocks producing 1 percent more children per generation) vr ,0 aeeain (about 20,000 years) would result in a 21,000 (1.01^1,000) to 1 advantage.

Only men are interested in large cocks. Women that have had babies may express a desire for thicker cocks but they appear to have no interest in longer than normal cocks. Which of course make logical sense all normal size cocks will fully fill a vagina.

what an engaging storyline. Five stars.

Must agree with a readers comment that this story is very engaging !

I found the exchange with Joan to be very mechanical. No emotion, no feeling just fact a, fact b, goodbye. At least with analeese she wept a tad.

A fun read. Still five stars. Still love it.

OH WELL. AT LEAST IT WASN'T ANOTHER CUCKOLD STORY!

Just finished the series

The absolute state of this guy, after the cold-as-stone way Joan told him she would have kept on fucking Mr. Bigdick for as long as she could, he takes her back on the advice of a whore?!

Forget closet cuck, this dude is a full blown cuck.

Unusually good for a JPB story, although Rob still has bad taste in women. I hope it stays this good.

Nice story, nice fantasy. They say everyone has fantasies, I disagree, I have never had a a fantasy or dreamt about being someone else. I have snow skied, and water skied, and raced cars professionally, I even built one from the ground up. I've earned a little money and a pretty good amount of money. The more I think about I have done a lot of things just because I saw them and decided to do them. I think many people 'see' things and then wonder if they could do them but they wind up being a fantasy because they never act on them, just like our hero here. He wanted to meet this young lady and had some money so he did it. By the way the stories are listed in the wrong order so I read the second one first and Ch. 1 second, kind of messed up the story. But it was well written and fun.