All Comments on 'One Naiad, Reporting for Duty'

by Alex De Kok

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
My Dream

Very nicely written, a story to create pleasant thoughts about someone in the family, makeing it all seem possible in the future. I'll keep on dreaming.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Quite an enjoyable story

Despite the "fancy free" relationship ending, this could easily develop into a romance story.

My compliments, Alex, on your impressive descriptive ability. From the words alone I could easily develop a mental picture of the characters, and their surroundings. Well done!

Kydreamer

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Auntie and Tom

The best. This story is something I have looked forward to for a very long time.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
series

This can easily be a continued series, even afterthe "two" are married.

16gauge16gaugeover 19 years ago
One Naiad

Liked the way Tom and his Aunt got together, how they enjoyed each other. Would be interesting to see where it goes from here.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Not Fair

I would trade a pair of broken legs for an Aunt Jackie of my own. Lucky bastard.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
One luck bastard, indeed!

This is story telling at it's best. I would have liked an aunt like Jackie, my life would have been so much better. But, keep up the excellent writing, that we all can enjoy.

Gary13Gary13over 16 years ago
Great story, great presentation

Alex, you've done it again. Gary

JKQBALLJKQBALLover 15 years ago
OUTSTANDING

VERY LOVING STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

GREAT READING.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

THANK YOU,

JERRY

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Lucky...

Wish I had an aunt like that.

ChucksSiteChucksSiteover 12 years ago
As Usual, a nice story. I'm always intrigued by ....

the unknown background of authors. Alex has had several scenes that point to either an occupation or hobby in photography, and the expertise is evident in his stories. This was another good one, a bit slow to develop, but romantic with the taboo situations that make it more erotic than normal couplings. And, it seems to have created more reminiscences for me as my favorite place to take my teen girlfriend was a nearby lake, actually two different lakes, where we enjoyed the wildlife, swam nude, and loved one another. Thanks for the fantasy and the memories!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

I hope there's more, I wish I had a Aunt Jackie

JohnnyMaxJohnnyMaxalmost 12 years ago
and next ?

Good little tale. Well written.

Lots of avenues to take this further, a lot further.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Well written!

I didn't have an aunt I fantasized about, but did have a few nighbours. Wish I could have acted out my fantasies with them...

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
HOT!!!!!!!

Very hot!

TSreaderTSreaderover 8 years ago
Fun and sexy...

Well written and fun to read... I wish they developed strings that kept them together!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Great story

Plus excellently written. One of the top stories on this site.

The old guy

alo0ozalo0ozabout 4 years ago
No love for casual sex

I hate casual sex. Sex needs love

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

And the sex in this story does have love involved -- they discussed the matter, if you recall. Just because the sex is "no strings attached" doesn't mean there isn't love. These are people who know and care about each other, so describing this as "casual" sex is simply incorrect.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great story

really well done story, slowly building up tension, coming to a very glorious ent.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

A truly lovely story but lent extra depth by the obvious admiration of the characters' abilities and talents. I sense more to come.

nightdragon1nightdragon1about 2 years ago

WOW!!!!!!! Great story. Loved it. More PLEASE??????????

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July 13, 2023 - As some of you have no doubt realised, I'm writing again, albeit very slowly. My late wife was a writer as well, although not on Literotica, and I think she would have wanted me to continue. May 24, 2021 - I haven't posted anything for some time now, and it ma...