All Comments on 'One night in Ottawa'

You have written one of the most despicable characters I have come across in quite a while. She isn't satisfied cheating on her husband , she needs to trick him into having a threesome unknowingly with her lover. Truly awful.

I liked the way you described the conflicts of desire and humane feelings here of the protagonist. Nicely done. Keep it up

Thanks very much - glad you liked the story.

Hey Spinningwheels. Thank you very much for the story. I really appreciated the perspective: a guy looking for a partner, then finding out she was married and his conflict with that. THen how it grew to proportions that he could not manage any more once he met the guy. It seemed pretty "real" to me. Thank you very much!