All Comments on 'One Night in St Jean - Pour nos Péchés'

Setting aside the tiny problem in this sentence: "I realized that I had a painful erection. How odd. As mesmerized by the woman as I had been, I hadn't noticed that before..." - no man doesn't know when he's got an erection (just so you know for next time) - this story is delicious. I would go looking for that doorway!

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No surprise to see eletricblue66's comment above mine. I was immediately reminded of his work while reading yours. You have a similar elegant style, but a much quicker pace that I appreciate. The story drew me in, and much like your protagonist, I found myself desperate to learn the secret of your three sirens. If there is any flaw, I'd have to say that your "sidebar" and your "old joke" seemed to clash with your overall style; I could have done without them. Those minor infractions aside, it was a thoroughly enjoyable read worthy of five stars.

I appreciate your insights. Constructive criticism is always welcome.

Favorite author!

Yes, a little witch craft, much mystery, with a dash of Sci-Fi, wonderful, and intriguing.

Five Stars!

What an incredibly delightful imagination! This is so perfectly articulated that when I was distracted, by a visitor, I was surprised that the ground was dry outside! Thank you for sharing!

Your skill with the written word never ceases to amaze me..

This story is inspirational to anyone who likes to write. You have a way with words that is sublime. The mystery you create is intoxicating. The sex is almost incidental. Now I truly want to know about these women and their secret society. Since that's not possible, I will dream.

heavenly-bitter=sweet I envy your almost perfection.

Such talent, skill and craft. Thank you for posting your works.

What an absolutely mind wonderful imagination you possess, and combined with your skill as a writer you have managed to send me on an intoxicating journey of magic and sensuality, just wow!

exceptionally well crafted tale. Wow.

What a delightful story. Sumptuous details, elegant use of language and sophisticated exposition of the plot. It’s a grand feeling to realize that I have over 100 more of your stories to enjoy. Toutes les étoiles.