All Comments on 'One Summer'

Basically there's a thing between bro & sis but she's a slut and actually fucks every man in the family that gives her the chance. Ok why not...could have been worse.

Although it was a bit long, you paced the action fairly well and produced a commendable story. ****

The sex was very lacking in details

GREAT story. I'm glad they didn't start fucking on page one and let things progress slowly!

Thank you so very much!!!!!!

few things

didn't need mom dad visit uncle aunt visit

why were needed in story ?

thought it was going to be a real family party but they came nothing happened and left

and really didn't get the uncle Mike thing!,Needs explaining still needs explaining

Great story I really want to know more about Megan and her dad plus keeping up Laura and Jack

This hot incest story, earned you Five Stars!! Great story line will written!! Just a few type o's, nothing to worry about. You could make this a mini series. Add more chapters, with more kids like them. A twin brother and sister,maybe.

Thank you for sharing this story with us.

This is the most awesome story I've ever read on this website,

I like how the story built from an innocent relationship over time. So many of these stories jump right in with "action" and no story build up.

Nutted 3 times reading this keep up the good work

I was with you up until that. It didn't fit. -1

I love finding these older stories. Very well done. Thank you.

The only thing that would have made this story better, was if she sucked her Grandpa off. This is a 84 year old horny grandpa. Only in my wildest dreams, an 18 year old taking my load of cum.