All Comments on 'One Summer Evening'

I LOVE these - hope there are more cumming.

I feel like I'm listening to a foreign cousin telling me a story - excellent.

Please, please - give us MORE!

Loved it. I hope that there will be more chapters cumming!

absolutely love the series so far but is there a chance of at least one true long lasting couple to ensue from those vacations?

5* other wise for the story.

I would have never known English was a second language. I only noticed one grammatical error - really probably a typo (you cock) s/b read your cock.

I loved this very hot story and have you favorited so I get notified of your next submission in your serie.

Thanks!

Really good story, so well writen, well done indeed 5*

Would like to read more of your stories

Thankyou, congratulations

What a bunch of scum of the earth people....

Many places in your story are not worded like western English - verbs and nouns are reversed. Given that this story in not in a western location and involves locals, your translation to English enhances the story. Each time I encounter the break in English "rules" I am reminded that this story takes place in another land. An English editor may well diminish your stories. As a native English speaking author, I like exactly how your English translation is presented, I like how you think and I like how you write. My vote, in your case, would be to nix the English editor.

Thanks for taking the time to write this good story.

I hope you have some more stories to come. I wish you had a little ending to this chapter. What about his nieces? Is he retired so he could stay in Paradise?

What a lovely story - all of yours are.

Can you do a follow up, you mentioned the young girls (daughter), so maybe next time at the beach, they as you said "requented by some nudists as well as people with swimwear that was hardly worth wearing" are wearing new thong Tanya bikini bottoms and tease the man because he can enjoy the woman and young girls (his sister and nieces) bums and boobs, and so his sister insists he goes naked to.be fair, and the girls agree happily!

Oh, and because Englishi is not your first language, your writing is somehow more sensual and naughty and not at all aggressive :)

Excellent, enought said 5* all day long .....

This is in general well written.

However, there is a certain dissonance to the main thread of the story.

If these two siblings have been dreaming/fantasizing about each other for 26 years, would they (in particular the sister who had the complete picture from the outset) get into a sexual act together for the first time then, just as participants of a group act with causal strangers taking part? Hmm ...

That was a lot of sex...

Everybody fucking everybody!

Nice fantasy & wouldn't it be nice if reality?

3 stars...