All Comments on 'Onesie is the Loneliest Number'

Very erotic. A good setup, transition, and payoff - congratulations on such good writing.

I wonder what the sister will think.

Very well written and very yummy too! Thank you!

Loved it! Very hot! Five stars and a favorite point!

Loved it! Very hot! Five stars and a favorite point!

really great story. i'd say one of your best - but they're all really great.

You did it again, Original best loving story, a bit rushing at the end. Love it, 5 star.

It would be nice for chapter 2. Best story from my favorite author.

You continue to write some amazing stories and never fail to entertain me.

Love the story. Just came to it....still no idea what a onesie is.

... but it seemed rushed, especially the end. I'm not sure what I would change. You are a great writer though, so what do I know.

The quality is still there but, they seem to

go by so fast. It's like your rushing to

get to the end. This one as all the rest,

are 5*.

...THANK YOU...

Y’all weird. I guess you’re gay by now

Well done Mate …..I am in the process of reading all your work and love all that I have read so far and can’t wait to read the rest. Thanks again Champion

Outstanding story, very well written and told...........():\

Great story, although I'm confused about the comments Judith made about the iron and matching board. Was his affair with a maid or housekeeper? Was it something I missed in the story? Guess I'll have to reread. 5⭐

Way to go Jake! Couldn't figure out at first why Hannah was so casual about flirting with Jake. Boy, I thought the brown stuff and hit the fan when Dad knocked on the bedroom door just after they had finished having sex. The fact that Jake and his mother wanted to keep and frame some of the photos was hilarious and it sure shut the old man up quick. For the commenter that didn't understand about the iron and ironing board reference, that's what Dad gave Hannah for her birthday. Great story.