All Comments on 'Open Window'

That was beautiful! 2 Fs for you, five stars and favorited.

Keep it up! Love your story writing

What a warm and heartfelt story. Very much enjoyed it.

Thank you for sharing your talent

I love love love this! I want this so much. Thanks for writing this <3

What an Outstanding story . I loved every moment of this story . And with a HAPPY ending ,it's so sweet . great job .

... was actually before the official sex began. That's rare and wonderful.

The fact that this was a real love story, with the emphasis on both and story, made the "interracial" part an after-thought at most. This was so much better than the "I love black women's big asses" or "I fell in love with his 29 inch black dick" format.

Thanks so much I can't tell you how long I have been waiting for another awesome interracial story! Hope to see more from you!

This story was perfect. And you didn't leave us hanging for months....years.

I look toward to more stories from you.

Anonymous Hottest Part of The Story! The best part of the love story took place before the sex ever happened. By the time they did have sex it truly was a pure expression of their love! Wonderfully written love story. Definitely five stars!

Is it better to post the story all at once or break it up into chapters? I'm kinda annoyed with Lola Wants but I'm going to finish it but I have another story that's 99% finished but it's long and can easily be posted a chapter at a time.

Hi, I prefer all at once, I even read a story of more then 30 pages some weeks ago.

By the way, this one was a very good story

This was just a beautiful story and it was completed! Thank you!

NOT GOING PAST FIVE STARS? WELL I'LL DO MY OWN DAMN STARS!!!

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Truly one of my favs and now if you will excuse me, I need to go take a long cold bath :)

and you don't mess with him. I enjoyed this story and would love to read about each one finding someone. Thanks for sharing your talent.

Loved this story I see that u said u have another almost done but what about part 5 of Lola Wants?

I loved this so much. the banter between Nikki and David was priceless And of course I the Nikki and Damien honesty and love made me smile throughout the entire story! do the brother's get their own stories?

good job. I happy they can start their lifes anew.

Beautiful story!! Thanks

was a very beautiful story:>)

awesome story really enjoyed!

Wonderful story; it brought a smile to my face and it was so heart felt. I enjoyed it; thank you.

I loved the content and your writing was beautiful. I am glad they are finally together...

I hope I meet someone like Damien

Im speechless, by far one of the best stories I've read in here

Without sarcasm, I'm glad they were such good friends that she could trust him when he said how special to him she was in every way even though she knew he'd been with more than sixty other women...

Also almost sad that they each loved the other so much that they were both almost willing to settle for only being friends (even if it was the best of friends) rather than risk even that to let their full feelings be known to each other...

Beautifully written love story...

I've always had a thing for friends becoming lovers, probably because there's so much already established trust in that kind of relationship that taking it to a physical place just seems like a no brainer. Love the interaction between Nik and Damien, and also the build up to an explosive culmination of their feelings for one another. Anyway, enough of my ramblings. I really enjoyed that and I thank you for sharing :)

By far the best story. Where is my Damin I'll wait for him.

its always sad , when you go to their Profile & see that they are no longer writing

AlmostTabby wrote/posted 6 very fine submissions during 8 weeks.

nearly 30 months ago ,

and has posted nothing since.

if you loved this story as much as i did ,

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This book is absolutely beautiful. Pure perfection.

I'm upset I accidentally gave it a 4. It wouldn't let me correct it to 5, but please know, it's worth a 10!

not that it mattered, the slow build up of love between these two was delightful love is colourblind

Same here. Should've been 5 star rating, not a 4. This is one of the best stories I have read on this site to date. I came very close to coming without even touching myself!

You have a magical way with words author. You truly are gifted.

Great story! I loved the build up and the end did not disappoint!

Thank you.

Good stough.

I loved how their relationship build up..how they started as best friends and ended up as lovers..loved it...

A bit rushed at the end, but the tone stayed constant which is a huge problem with many reluctant/unsure relationship tales. You didn't give details - usually a major complaint of mine - but it somehow fit these characters.

I'm wavering on the idea of pushing the epilogue further to include they had a daughter they named after his mom... but it's more of a 'feeling' not a 'need'.

Overall a solid 4 to 4.5 story, rounded to 5 for the solid way you told it.

J

I wouldn't say the ending was rushed. More like it just swept aside all the conflict in the story in a wholly unsatisfying way. Oh, not only is there justice but they also get millions of dollars? Well hooray for fairy tales! I mean, why not just have them win the lottery too? And Damien's band becomes the highest selling recording artists of all time! Oh, or maybe it turns out their mom was never really dead after all!

And they are all gonna live together? Well that's just weird.

I love a 'happily ever after' ending, but I think you went a little overboard with this one. Especially with how somber the rest of the story was.

One of my favorites on Literotica. I like a good steamy porn story as much as anyone, but a love story like this one is a real treasure. Thank you.

“I’ve been bored.”

“So you ask me about my sex life?”

lol, if only we could all do that when we are bored.,,

Loved it!

Beautiful story, I loved the relationships everyone had with each other. Although, I do wish the ending could’ve been a part 2 of their story, still loved it though!

Well done! ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

It was very romantic loved it

Cute one. I like it