by jasliz
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<p class=MsoNormal>This story has the silliest plot line <b>ever</b><span
style='font-weight:normal'> on a list that is full of silly plot lines.<o:p></o:p></span></p>
<p class=MsoNormal>The couple must not have lived – or even spent a
weekend – together prior to marriage, which is pretty strange.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal>Nothing is said about Tara being a virgin upon marriage,
which might account for some of her reluctance/distaste for sexual activities.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal>Why no divorce/annulment?<span style="mso-spacerun:
yes"> </span>Nothing is said about any financial lock Tara had on Jake –
otherwise, why didn’t he hit the road?<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class=MsoNormal>And if divorce was “against his religion” why is it that
adultery isn’t?<span style="mso-spacerun: yes"> </span>And Tara’s
condonation makes her equally complicit.<o:p></o:p></p>
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I just don't know what to say! your story line was a bit weak but somehow i feel you've got the talent in you....next time describe the story in detail rather using """""
Hot damn -- I loved it.! Brought back a lot of memories from days a years gone by.! Married my Virgin wife to find out she did not like "SEX" - only the making out.! Her Sister loved sex and was available so I guess you know the rest**** divorced her and married her Sister and we had 3 kids and are still married.! WOW
Why would he stay married to the icebox? Why would they get married without having sex before? How long will it be before Jake sends his wife to the showers and invites Allison to take her place in all things?
The potential for the story is there.
I chuckled all the way through it and look forward to the next chapter. Thank you for the entertainment.
plot line but it is sanely developed and well written.Interested to see where it goes.