All Comments on 'Orc Bait 03'

by Axelotl

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josephstevensjosephstevensover 10 years ago
Very Good Indeed...

Great story. Well written and erotic. Something for ever taste, and, even though a little long for my fleeting male concentration, well worth the read! Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Awesome

Never stop

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Axelotl

Rohme the ranger is about get some magor payback in chapter 4 against our favorite witch.Can't. Wait for Orc bait 4 see the ruins and probably some new creatures hope to see mores of her advenures. Axeltol hope you started on next submission soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
p

I knida want Aerowyn to live and be a slave to Rhomen .

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

When is the next one coming out??

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
awful

Little creativity would be nice.

AxelotlAxelotlalmost 10 years agoAuthor
too bad

If you want Little creativity, look elsewhere. I only give BIG creativity. Haha!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Bout halfway through I started reading for the story...and that says something. This is good.

wd56wd56almost 2 years ago

it says something that I stopped being horny and switched to actually reading the story. Brilliant!

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