All Comments on 'Orc Bait 04'

Nice update. Crazy good story

That was awesome, Axe! :D. Woot! Oh please continue.

More feedback when I have the full keyboard and not a tiny screen...

Sent more as promised privately, but really, wow. I've rarely ever seen characters, well outlined before, filled in and made whole like this in a single brushstroke. Really well done; it's one of those chapters that raises the depth of the previous three chapters just by existing, even if it wasn't originally there when you were writing the previous ones (or maybe it was...that's what I mean, you can't tell. Nor do I need to).

Looking forward to the conclusion! :)

So Aerowyn really isn't Chaotic Evil, she's 'just' a really really assholeish Chaotic Neutral :)

Thoroughly enjoyed this piece so far. 10/10

..thinking I wasn't gonna get spoiled for fantasy story like this again, and then this one pops up. Then I savored this one. Good fun! And OI plot twist.