by Goldeniangel
This was a nice, hot, quick read. I would have liked it even more if it were expanded a bit, giving a bit of build up and foreshadowing before the encounter, but well worth the read as a single hot scene.
if you had gone ahead and used black for orc the way most of these orc , I meant black stories are written; huge cock never settle for anything else.
...has penis issues.
Deal with it, bub. Don't take out your penis issues on the author.
once again someone commenting that your submissions are too short. what a waste.
I very much liked the shortness and to-the-point nature of your little tale. I like Orcs; I wish they lived in my neck of the woods!
I would have never guessed that Orcs could turn a woman on! Yummy, yummy juicey story.
I loved the fact that it was short, to the point, yet still very hot!
and to the blck commenter. black orc's do not dominate the large penis area, the other commenter is right you do have issus.
Short and to the point but very sweet. Nice to have a human/orc encounter thats enjoyed by both parties