All Comments on 'Orc Relations'

Don't usually read stories in this category, but I'll give this one a shot. Hope you've got more stuff in the oven!

I usually don't care as much for the stories written from the mother's POV, but this one really caught my interest.

Really good character build up. Without giving any indication of relative ages, you managed to convey the sense that the son was just barely sexually mature, and seemingly not quite mature enough yet to understand what he was doing.

The scene in the dungeon had me looking for bloody revenge from somebody, but I suppose that was probably not possible in their situation. Kind of a powerless minority scenario.

All together a well written story, good ending which both closes the book and leaves room for continuation.

Thanks for a good read.

Pretty damn good! Would like to see a part two!

This story was amazing and i'm hoping for a sequel. I want to know more about Rago's father and see Rago develop more, also Helzan and Rago become even closer. This story ended well so if there's no sequel I'll still be okay with it. Now I have to see what other stories you have, also 5 stars.

What does your writing schedule look like.

Holy crap, that was amazing. Please Please do more! heck even make a patreon and I'm sure me and many others would help support you.

But I thought I'd give it a shot given your pedigree, and what do you know, it's as good as your other stuff! Well done, hope to read more from you.

Not gonna lie I really love this story. Enough so that I'm looking forward to a part 2, there is going to be a part 2 right, please please please do a part 2

Please make this story a series... thanks in advance!!!

this need another part....5stars from me

A fantastic story...with lots of future potential. What's the story of Rago's father? Does Helzan get revenge for what the guards did? Does she thank them? How about Helzan's first customer that bought weapons? This genre is usually not my type but you did an excellent job with it. Please...a few more chapters.

Another ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ Story of yours not completed. What is it with you guys do you get bored writing these stories have writers block. Whatever it is, you not only fucking piss me off but everyone else who reads your stories. Get your fucking act together and finish what you start or don’t bother at all… ONE PISSED OFF READER..