by HectorBidon
You built the anticipation and sexual tension well. A few comments. Why would you have sex in the wild after a tick scare? Also, the naivety of the characters was over the top. That said, it was erotic and entertaining. Overall it was an enjoyable read.
I like the story alot. I like how the characters were a liitle shy and didn't rush into penetration. Good build up.
I love hiking stories and you have presented us with a wonderful short story, It would be nice if you followed this up with a second and third chapter to let us know how they make out,
RecHiker
"Who's that walking in these woods, why it's little red riding hood. She's everything a big bad wolf could want".
Mick Jagged
A great story, natural, inocent and loving. I look forward to more.
I love love love LOVE this story!
Awesome tale, nicely-timed reveal of the sexy parts of the story. Loved her pretty bare feet. I hope you tell more of their story.
One really really great story. I wish my life had been more like this but I have been with the women I love for decades.