All Comments on 'Orienteering Each Other'

by HectorBidon

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Oh, c'mon

NO ONE is that naïve. That said, I still loved it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Cute story

It was fun with the couple getting to know each other.

Tombstone82Tombstone82almost 7 years ago
Fun

You built the anticipation and sexual tension well. A few comments. Why would you have sex in the wild after a tick scare? Also, the naivety of the characters was over the top. That said, it was erotic and entertaining. Overall it was an enjoyable read.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Enjoyed

I like the story alot. I like how the characters were a liitle shy and didn't rush into penetration. Good build up.

RecHikerRecHikeralmost 7 years ago
Thank you for sharing -

I love hiking stories and you have presented us with a wonderful short story, It would be nice if you followed this up with a second and third chapter to let us know how they make out,

RecHiker

oldbob68oldbob68almost 7 years ago
Loved it

Sexy, novel, tender, and sweet. I really enjoyed it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Very nice

Not too long, very sweet. Great job!

maddictmaddictalmost 5 years ago
OOPS, to be young again

"Who's that walking in these woods, why it's little red riding hood. She's everything a big bad wolf could want".

Mick Jagged

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Great.

A great story, natural, inocent and loving. I look forward to more.

BufoAmericanusBufoAmericanusover 3 years ago
Thanks

Thanks for a well written plausible story.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

I love love love LOVE this story!

Awesome tale, nicely-timed reveal of the sexy parts of the story. Loved her pretty bare feet. I hope you tell more of their story.

Coochielover71Coochielover715 months ago

One really really great story. I wish my life had been more like this but I have been with the women I love for decades.

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