All Comments on 'Ostracism Pt. 03'

At the end of this chapter all I was thinking was why do they still bother? Sure Danny has some hope but MM on the other hand seems to be perfectly happy in her new little bf/gf world with a scary box of condoms the only dent in her perfect vision. Even the cliffhanger wasn't all that it was supposed to be, just a bunch of hopeful planning by Danny with no real measure of success if e somehow manages to shake the blinded beauty from her reverie. At least i hope she listens to him before something bad happens to her....

3*

Is this story going to get anywhere?

I waited a month just to get get another story of him pissing and moaning about MM. This is starting to get tedious.

It's already 4:30 PM, so I would be surprised if it was approved and published tomorrow.