by morris40
The story too, but I praise your note to 'Imagine' us, the reader, to be the characters in your story. That's the reason many of us read ... to be experiencing the author's words and actions. You know too well how to draw each interested reader into your web of fantasy. Interesting also that you use an album as a focal point. We attended a club in Pacific NW that had a library; albums of every weekend party since opening. It was the best ever "mansion" styled, three story adult playhouse ever. You can be sure nothing was visible without a release. I THINK!!!!!!
Really enjoyed this one. Loved the indecision of the wife when they started. This is natural, but so few stories have it.