All Comments on 'Our Daughter, The Photographer'

by TryAnything

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ChallengedChallengedover 4 years ago
Print Ready!

VERY well done. One of the few I actually read, start to finish.

THANK YOU... for entertaining me. ;--)

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
hot as hell

I can see the scenes back of my mind, such a great narration.

This one is a KEEPER.

SWT3SWT3over 4 years ago
What a great fantasy

This is one of Tryanthing's best. It is well written, erotic and creative. All it lacks is a love character for the daughter. The story hits so many tags that it is very special.

goducks111goducks111over 4 years ago
wow

this is a great story. sexy, erotic and very hot. kept me reading from start to finish. 5 stars. wish i could give it 10!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Obligatory 1/5 for being cuckoldry/NTR without a clear disclaimer

parputter69parputter69over 4 years ago
Just a little more!

Gave 4 stars. Wanted to do be 5 but I would have liked more sex. Is there a sequel in the works? I would like to follow Tina on a couple of her shoots and maybe another "party". Just my thoughts. Glad you are back posting.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Great story, I hope you write part two.

andyMassageandyMassageover 4 years ago
Just added you to my favorites

Great story, enjoyable on so many levels. Looking forward to reading and enjoying more of your writing and see how this one continues.

goducks111goducks111over 4 years ago
sorry to comment a second time

but i'm stunned this story doesn't have a 4.8 or better score. it's unf*cking believable. Very very erotic. maybe too many airheads on this site can't read 5 brilliantly written pages. great job here, TryAnything

DomJ69DomJ69over 4 years ago
Almost Brilliant

Superb idea and a very erotic concept. I just wish you had proof read it to eliminate the mistakes and the repetition, because it would have been one of the best stories on here.

What would have made it even better would have been to include Tina's thoughts. That would have made it an incredible story.

rightbankrightbankover 4 years ago
interesting

but not for me

it is hard to figure out which category it belongs in

virusmanvirusmanover 4 years ago
Everything you could wish for sexually speaking

Wow, this touched so many of my hottest fantasies I almost came reading it. Voyeurism, exhibitionism, group orgy, close up fucking, multiple orgasms, bucket loads of hot cum, all as vivid as a video. Absolutely a favourite.

andyMassageandyMassageover 4 years ago
great story 5 plus stars for originality

Where did this cum from. Can not wait to read part 2. One of the best stories.

Dear Tina, I don't have $100k or $250k, however I am a 29 year old friend of Issac

and Sarah. Can I be your gopher assistant for a year to work off the fees😀

xxxxcccooooo Had to add another comment myself

As a writer I like your style of writing.

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57over 4 years ago

Loved it, especially when she fucked and sucked her parents! Five stars and a favorite point!

tim0277tim0277over 4 years ago
Please add more chapters

Enjoyed this syory so much that i hope you add more chapter to it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

The story is not bad but it's jumbled. I think it would work better if Isaac was the clear main character. Everything that plays out is really his fantasy. He is the one who really wants everything that happens in the story. But he's only a secondary character which makes it hard to identify with him.

sid9764sid9764over 4 years ago
WOW

So hot!!! Really hope there is another addition to this story

stevemillerstevemillerover 4 years ago
More please!

Love this one and it looks like others do as well. Please keep the story going since this was setup to allow for many more chapters to follow.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Absolutely Fantastic Sooo Hot 🔥

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Hot! Good read.

bigreddog543bigreddog543over 2 years ago

Good story, weak ending.

IJS0904IJS0904over 2 years ago

Ridiculous premise and I loved it! This was a fun read and very erotic. Thanks.

BiMtBiMtalmost 2 years ago

My Very favorite. Please a follow up

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I’ve had the soul shaking experience seen of seeing my daughter’s porn. At first it’s very, very disturbing, I could hardly sleep for several nIghts. Then, you can’t not stop thinking about it. Finally I had a VERY private conversation with my beautiful red headed daughter. It ended in the greatest sexual experience of my life. My prize possession is not an expensive sports car but a picture of my beautiful daughter’s eyes looking up at me with her lips wrapped around my cock. I love every inch of that incredible young lady.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Your stories are all pretty good, so far. My one issue with your writing is that you seem to drop the ball at the end. They are always abrupt, and leave the reader wanting more, but not in a good way. In a frustrated 😠 out of nowhere kind of way.

creativeandfuncreativeandfunover 1 year ago

I absolutely loved this story. I have read it twice and masturbated both times. The orgasms were quite intense.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

That was a very fun story to read and very well told. You write really well. Looking forward to reading your other stories.

getthephenomgetthephenom12 months ago

Amazing story, loved the premise. 5 ⭐

DerFixter70DerFixter7010 months ago

Great and funny story well writen with a nice build-up. The end is far to sudden and leaves the reader hanging.

arrow013arrow0135 months ago

Fantastic story, the ending was a little sudden and left the reader on a cliff hanger. I hope there is another chapter one day

GalaxyCoderGalaxyCoder3 months ago

Fantastic and highly erotic story that you must take much further.

AzdesertcplAzdesertcpl3 months ago

Wow, one of the best ever. An amazing storyline and soooooo erotic! Continue please.

Hgvdriver2Hgvdriver211 days ago

Great story, loved ever part of it. We are sure that there would be far fewer divorces and separations if more couples experimented in the lifestyle like this

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I've been writing since about 1995 and have never until I submitted a few stories to Literotica in 2002 had anyone read anything I've written. I have been absolutely astonished beyond words at the response to my stuff. I write from the sordid depths of my imagination, secret...