All Comments on 'Our Family Album'

I liked the story very much, soft and sexy....except you used the word "cunt". Cunt isn't a soft word... it took away from the story a little. It should be saved for stories with hard , fast, fucking, etc.

that was good erotic story and keep up ch. 02 thanks cfh

It all happened too fast , his sister should have hesitated before stripping and should have put up some objections .The way she crept her hand down to his crotch and kissed around his neck speaks like she had been there before yet you never said so until later when you said they looked at each other in bed .

that was beautiful... well written, extremely erotic, and sexy and a cliff hanger. it flowed perfectly. i loved it and am soo looking forward to the next chapter

Please don't leave it long before giving us the next part.....

Lukas

Seriously, that is some good writing, but I have to get the finale. I just stumbled on to your work, but I have a feeling this story will prompt me to read a lot more of your archive. You have a great style, and I love your descriptive text. I will be checking back eagerly for more. Thanks.

Wow.......just came across your writings. You are really good at bringing words into visions.....hope to read the next episode soon.

I happen to have liked that story very much. Good job.

It was a really hot beginning to what should have been a really good tale......but IT NEEDS MORE CHAPTERS!

What the hell happened at the end? Maybe I am a bit dim, but how did her big toe get in the way, and it could only have done so if Melissa had dislocated knee and hip, so !

I don't think leaving readers in confusion at the end of story is quite the done thing! Cheers, Michael

I appreciate the slow buildup and your talent for detailed language. Without a word about the act to come, the reader knows beyond a doubt what comes next. Kudos and thanks! Jim

a half finished story is worse than no story so either finish this story properly and soon or delete it and all other unfinished stories. leaving stories in this shape is totally unfair to the readers your MUSE isn't missing your just lazy. if you don't want to finish find another writer you like and ask them to finish it for you.

thank you

Lol.....cummmmmm on!!!! Ya gotta finish this story,hell ive read it twice in the last week....quit teasing!!!!

Hot with a capital "H"!

Not worth reading.