All Comments on 'Our First'

good lead in

Bravo!! Very good indeed. I admire the way you take the time to describe your narrator’s experiences - precisely what he sees and hears - and his complex emotional responses to them, in fine detail, very arousing. I’m looking forward to the next chapter.

Nicely done first story. Anxious to read what follows. Bring it Alex.

Can't wait for part two! Luxurious tempo, the right words at the right time... yum

Thanks all, part two going up....nnnnow.

*once submission is approved...

Well done Sir! Hope there is more to come.

Part 2 is up!

https://literotica.com/s/his-second-a-hotwife-sequel

VERY WELL DONE! For all lovers of real good cuck stories a must!