All Comments on 'Our Morning Walk'

Dr beulahthebrit; Nice story of a mum and her daughter sharing as they should, only downer, was the bloody condom, they feel awful and stop the wonderful feeling of hot pulses of cum splattering inside your cunt.

Use quotations. it slows down the story otherwise.

Quotation marks are NOT optional!

More?

Needs a bit more punctuation. It is not readable for a non native English speaker this way. Too bad, it looked interesting...