by dave110256
go away, the world would be a better place without idiots like you and please don't have a family and carry on the sickness.
All things considered, it's probably better to feel sorrow for the haters rather than contempt.
Delightful story, five stars.
All I can say is that I wish I was the other girl, and shared the moment with you and Mary. What a great life experience and one that doesn't come around often. Now I'm going to read how you met your wife!
ya have to wonder why such a person was on this site anyway! Did his cock get hard and drooling, was he stroking and cumming with a great sense of sinfullness? Did she bury several fingers deep in her cunt, stroking her g-spot, and spinning that sweet juice around her wet slick clit, maybe sliding her sopping wet little finger in her ass, clinching and loosening that cunt as she came, with a regretful look on her face?
Give me a break, and loan me Chantell for the night!
And yet, I have to point out that if you rewrite this story with the husband bringing another guy home to do a threesome with the wife, the haters will come out in force and explain how the husband is a wimp and the wife is a whore and they will all die of diseases, etc...
It really wasn't my type of story. Having said that I want to again say Mr Anonymous came back to insert his insults. I am sorry that that happened. If they don't like it they shouldn't read it and since they did they are implying the must have enjoyed at least a portion of it.
Keep trying.
My first three stories are true to the last detail. Unfortunately the "Loving Wives" catagory takes a real bashing from the "Anonymous" posters who also One-bomb every story. I just don't understand why they bother if they don't like the catagory.
There are catagories I don't read but certainly wouldn't post negative comments just because it's not what turns me on.
My fiction stories I create I won't put in this catagory though I'd love to write a few....have some hot ideas.
EVERYTHING I put in this catagory scores EXTREMELT low scores consistantly.....what a shame. These guys need to get a life
But not a bad read. One thing - as a plot contrivance - saying that this is a "true story" does nothing for the story as no one believes you.
Enjoyed the story I'm not so certain that the wedding night was such a good idea.
I did get tired of the guy's constant amazement and disbelief ("I was amazed that..." or "I couldn't believe that...") That same phrase was repeated about every other paragraph.