All Comments on 'Out West Ch. 13: Kidnap'

Pixie, thank you for assuring us that everything will be alright in the end, by foretelling the story of the next generation in the beginning.

Darling, the story of your lovemaking with Evie is the most beautiful you have written, and you have written many. I am with you, I can feel what you feel when Evie gives you all her sexual energy, when it becomes all yours. Your orgasm is not mentioned in passing, it is front and center in unison with Evie's. Thank you for that.

Others see your beauty too, your elegance and poise on horseback, as Martha's journal describes it.

I fear not for you but for the seven bastard who kidnapped you. They have something bad coming to them, most deservedly so.

...that sudden halt was like a serial at the kids' Saturday morning cinema shows when I was a youngster. The cliff was well and truly hung and we knew we'd have to wait a full week to find out what happened to our hero/heroine. Thus it is with this story. I'm on tenterhooks now as I'm sure most of your readers will be. Never mind, the goodies will prevail, I'm sure, as they always did. As an afterthought, I very much admired Tim's eloquence when talking of bigots. The cost of his Eton education was well spent.

Yet another wonderful chapter Pixie, so much fun writing with you. You make my little bits look like they are something. Wonderful flow and scenes make me... Happppyyy. Hugs and kisses forever.

Congratulations on a breathtaking 5 star chapter. It had my attention right from the start and held it through until the end. The scene with Pixie and Evie was erotica at its very best and took my breath away. The horror of lovely Pixie being kidnapped and threatened with rape made me gasp for breath and I had to voluntarily restart my breathing. My only criticism is that the story doesn’t come with a government wealth warning: “Reading this can damage your wealth & health. Remove expensive underwear and sit on a large folded bath towel. Have a lady trained & ready to administer mouth to mouth stimulation. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED!”

Darling Amadeus, I am so glad to have your comments, and delighted that the part I poured my heart and soul into has met with such approval. The kidnappers are in for a surprise, but not the one they have planned, xxxxxx

Thank you darling Maonaigh, and sorry for the delay! The next part is at proof-read stage and should be submitted soon. Yes, an Eton education is sometimes not wasted - even if some of the alumni seem to be xxxxx

Mama S, your parts are wonderful, and we work well together. I am delighted you enjoyed it so much xxxx

My precious Evie, what can I say? Thank you for being you and for allowing me to communicate something of ourselves to the Lit world. I do think your warning a jolly good idea, and it ought to apply to drafts of your Belle saga as well *giggles* love, Emily Pixie xxxxxx

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And that's where the blaggards made their mistake. Underestimate Pixie at your own peril. She might be a tiny morsel, but something tells me Ben Iverson bit off more than he can chew by kidnapping our favorite little heroine. All he did was allow one of his enemies into his Midsts. Wth Pixie on the inside, and Jack, Tim, and the ladies on the outside,, they have the bad guys right where they want them. Of all the people in the group to kidnap, Pixie, with her unassuming presence and razor sharp mnd, might be the worst choice they could have made. They certainly don't realize what she is capable of when moved to action. And with her growing confidence, she is even more formidable. Something also tells me that Evie isn't going to show any mercy to the scum who took her love when the fit hits the shan. I can't wait for the next chapter 🍿🍿🍿🍿🍿

...and more dangerous for our dear Pixie. I do hope the plan that Jack/Martha and Tim devise will save Pixie from harm.

Prior to that dramatic ending (which was very well written), the chapter was lovely... and I liked the way all of them are getting along - in particular, Pixie and Evie. They make such a wonderful couple, and they make love in a most magical way. :)

Thank you Anonymous. I just submitted the next chapter - so I hope it will not be too long before you have the fun of seeing whether you were right xxxx

Thank you so much, darling OneAuthor - I am so pleased you like it. The next chapter has just been submitted - so fingers crossed xxxx

This sounds not loke a happy end for the big girls travelling group ...... Some gets hurt or even killed ...... This feels aweful, like "merlin" the forebood for the stormy time ...... 🌚

well, Franziska, wait for the end - I think you may be surprised xxxxx