All Comments on 'Outback Affairs'

Although it sucks to be Terry, loved the story. 5 ⭐.

May is a deceptive whore, and overall a despicable person. Most of these characters didn't have very redeeming qualities. Too bad from an author who I generally have always liked their stories through the years.

End?

No!

You've put it out here, or you foot out there, so a follow-up is mandated. Please?

I guess, I have a problem with the duplicity. If May, had come clean to Terry (and arranged for his sabbatical) , I would have given it more stars. Well written, like all you stories.

That first anon is an idiot. No one forced him to read. And what is up with no redeeming qualities? Dude, you're on a porn site. If you want romance or happily ever after, go buy a Harlequin romance paperback. Redeeming qualities. Give me a break. Was the story well written? Yes. Did it have hot sex? The only problem was it ended with a thud, not a bang. It just sort of floundered at the end. Otherwise great tale. With any luck we get a followup. 5/5 stars.

Dewey Cheatham

Nikki, Nikki, Nikki, I did not like your story... I loved it!!!!!! You did it again! Anyone that have anything to say regarding your stories or writing, they can go f#@# themselves. Keep on writing, please, I get so much pleasure of reading your stories. Just make sure to have to correct characters named in them passages. Like, in your last chapter, you had a line, "said Gary" when it was actually Andy. You have several occasions through out the story, this can be confusing/annoying to the readers. Don't how your proofreader could have missing that. But overall, loved it and really hope there is a second part to this story, you definitely have a lot of material and loose ends.

Nikki, Though this was a long read I LOVED IT. Is there a next part to it as I am sure that there are many of us that would love to know the future for Andy and Kylie, What about Gary and Astrid, and I'm sure that there is scope for Terry to enjoy openly sharing May with her brother. Lets not forsake Jenn either she would love to engage in a bit of 3some or moresome with the rest of the family

To read 19 pages and get no real resolution is a real bummer.

Good but I hope there is more the story has so much to give us

Family fuckeries are fucking dogshit, especially if they are dragged out and have garbage endings too.

Thank you for another great story and please continue on with another chapter/book.

Also a big thank you for making the main character small chested; as not all females have a DD chest and all males don't have 12"+ members. In my mind I see Kylie as a small A, Jen a B, May a C and Astrid between a B and C. As a side note, it has been my experience that small breasted women are more sensitive; it's either that or I was just doing something right. Anyway to get back on point, please keep up the great work and ignore the nay sayers.

Wonderful story! Thank you!

I can certainly understand why you did many of the things that you did in the story, and it's not unlike many of the other ones that I've read from you. Generally, you mix it up with different people involved, and everybody kind of has their fun. Now I must say that probably the best resolution you posited was Gary and Astrid, because not only were they a cute couple, but it avoided Gary staying hooked on Jen. I like the fact that you certainly placed Andy and Kylie together, and that you didn't make him have any reservation about her being rather flat. In fact it was kind of interesting that you made her a redhead, but she wasn't as well proportioned as the average redhead, and really all she had to offer was from the waist down. I did appreciate her perky personality, and her extra willingness to engage in certain activities. I can certainly see the appeal in May and Jack, which really and ultimately let Kylie and Andy off the hook. You certainly had May reflect plenty on Kylie's relationship, as well as her and Jack's. Overall you examined everybody's relationship quite well, although we should expect for everybody to get involved, it still would have made more sense if certain things would have been avoided.

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Every reader can understand how conflicted May felt by not having Jack in her life as a partner. The only thing is that this kind of tale actually delves into the realm of loving wives, and while we can understand May feels cheated out of her possible fate, May isn't a particularly sympathetic character either! While she scores a lot of points for not condemning Andy and Kylie's relationship, she never has to face any consequences for being with her husband, but then going to enjoy Jack too. In fact, her real husband is so clueless that really it's almost beyond belief. I can certainly understand a guy not feeling jealous, and that's normally a very big plus in his favor, but in this case it really makes him look like a very one-dimensional character, and unfortunately just a character that's getting pissed on, frankly. You should have pursued either having May forcibly having to decide between Terry or Jack, and basically not getting to fool around with Jack once a quarter, while somehow being faithful to Terry. That obviously is not possible when she's enjoying both sides, but not feeling guilty about it. You could have used the additional pages to somehow bring her parents back into the picture and force her to talk to them or have her parents confront May or even paint Terry as not generally jealous, but somebody that was probably suspecting something was up to some degree after some time but to leave him so clueless makes him seem like a simp. Jack really isn't painted as very sympathetic either, because he's enjoying her at the expense of Terry, and while okay... they're isolated and in the Outback.. that's really Jack's choice. So the realization that should hit most people should be okay either I take and go someplace where I can have more female interaction, or just get used to next to non-existent company because I love this station this much. The reality is the kids are truly forced to make more of a decision and take more responsibility than the actual adults are, and that really flips the entire script. This is an addition to what several commenters have said, which is that's after an exceptionally-inspired production, we weren't treated to anyone stepping up to make the big decision. You can float a story without any serious consequences, but usually it's going to be much shorter, and it's not going to involve as many people. So while I've read some of your stories that were just so amazingly well done and worthy of a 5, this one doesn't deserve it. People covered, different couples had their fun, and kind of like you used Kylie and Andy's characters to flounder and basically not define their relationship after tons and tons of time together, it's like everybody was saying well, let's just have our fun, and if we get caught we'll kind of face the music if it happens.. but we're not going to take accountability for anything we're actually doing. At some point, regardless of what kind of story it is, there must be resolution for everybody and not just resolution for one couple. Certainly the way you presented solving the issue with Gary by having the Swedish backpacker come in seemed very novel to me, and definitely very believable! While I can appreciate people having their romps, and some very detailed and enjoyable ones too.. really the only other people that had to kind of resolve what they did was Kylie and Andy. That still left half of the characters just kind of hanging. While I don't get the sense that you're going to continue this, you could redeem the story itself by posting another installment, and taking the time tie up all these multitudinous loose ends. But as it stands now, there's just a ton left undone, and unlike the many different escapades drawn up, the ending doesn't satisfy very many at the end of the day. Given these unresolved issues, I can only rate it a 4.

Enjoyed this sexy story very much and hope you write more of it with all of these characters included. Kylie and Andy's relationship is not incest in Australia. It may be taboo as far as family is concerned but they can get married here if they want to.

I did enjoy the story but was surprised you ignored Australian law that says categorically that first cousins are allowed to have relationships and indeed marry if they wished, but I understand that in fantasy world that would have taken some of the stress out of the relationship between Kylie and Andy and let's face it a little stress in this world can be a good thing, adds a little spice, flavour to the sex.

Are you telling me my favourite author on here is a Brisbanite??? 😍😍😍😍😍 as always Nikki a wonderful story that really focused on the love, but the lust was perfect too

It was a pretty good story, but it would have been better without using the word "Like" constantly. And also some of the language used with family members (Profanity) was really unnecessary and I felt took away from the story.

Too hard to keep all the relationships straight. Not a lot of romance or affection and way too much cheating for my tastes.

Well done, here. It was better written and, presumably, edited than most of your stories.

However, your name "control" did drift somewhat, occasionally: -

"Gary" got replaced by "Jack" for a few paragraphs before they left the station; and elsewhere "Jan" became "Kylie", which was offset elsewhere-elsewhere when "Kylie" became "Jan"; presumably all a proof-reading result of "scanning" the text, rather than taking the time to read it "word-for-word"!

Really good story except for the very end but still very good overall

In Oz marriage (and sex) between first cousins is not illegal neither is it in the UK. Obviously it is between brother and sister but cousins, no. In some countries polygamy is allowed and even in some states in the US.

Personally I love tiny tits (especially those on the French girl who lives round the corner) but my wife is 38FF which is too f-ing big.

Thanks Nikki, you really know how to write a stimulating story.

Having sex and marriages between first cousins aren't illegal in most, if not all, of the states in the U.S. either. Although most people don't know it and very few work approve if they did. And from what I've heard, it isn't in a couple states for siblings once they are adults.

So this is a another cuck story, only a long drawn out cuck story. I guess everyone has to get on the band wagon. The MC is a deceitful bitch, but I guess all the cucks in hiding love that. At least put cheating whore in the tag line. Funny reading some other comments when they say to ignore the negative comments and only their positive comments are worth something. One even goes on and says that basically after 19 pages of I am sure hard work, that Nikki doesn't spend time trying to develop characters and story it is only about the sex. True written porn, but he is an idiot if he thinks anyone who writes 19 pages isn't trying to develop more than just sex. Still 3 stars for effort, however 1 star just another cuck story in a sea of cuck stories on Lit.

It is so much more enjoyable reading a story with developing characters and story line. This could be just the first chapter in a extended period of time. Hopefully, there follows all interactions as time goes on.

I absolutely love this story and its body positivity please continue it soon!

Wow ! NO downside ? Maybe there is still hope ! Thanx !