All Comments on 'Outer Banks Vacation'

A very well written and exciting story. I like stories of mutual love and affection without the need for controlling the others. The guidance of an older more experienced person works well too. Keep up the good work and thank you

Ready for part 2.

Is she really on the pill or did she just say that ?? Does she get pregnant ?

Do mom and dad join in ??

Really enjoyed this story of love and your style.

Looking forward to what comes next.

What a pleasure to read a professional writer's words. So well written, I kept reading in spite of my personal anal aversion. Beautiful story. Fun. The dialogue and hesitation were perfect. Although I half expected to find that Don and Kelly were brother and sister. Great work. Cheers.

One of the hottest stories I have had the pleasure reading! Well paced and the lead up to the climax (climaxes!) was perfect. Mucho Stars due , but only Five possibly voted.

That was a awesome story. What a helluva buildup and a great ending! I have read quiet a few stories on this site and this one keeps your attention and just a fantastic read.. Thank you...

Thankfully, the tags told me this went the wrong direction without having to read it. I/T stories and a threesome always spells turning off the heat and turning on the disappointment.

Well written and steaming hot.

Great story!!!!! I will start seeing these McMansions here on the Outer Banks and wonder if that could be the house. I know it's a work of fiction, but the author definitely knows a thing or two about our little sandbar.

Fantastic!

Definitely needs a part 2

Great story. Great setting. Hope there is more.

Just coming back from OBX and being in the same area this story is very special. This story is very hot. Thanks

Write another chapter please.

Freaking perfect! Well written, you pulled me along! Please take this further!!

waste of time!

What?? Where was the activity n with Kelly? Part 2?????? Pretty plzzzzzz!!!!

I love NC. Thanks for the excellent story.

OMG wat an ending; surprise after surprise. As said earlier, this is one of the best written stories on this site. Congratulations

Kevin and Sam need to continue their fucking. In time they can start a family.

So fucking hot! Could only be better if it was on another site and Sam could be 16 as would be expected in this day and age. Can't believe a story with a 18 year old virgin. Please give all of us another thrill by going forward with this story.

What an amazing story. The buildup was fantastic!

Hot n sext story and please write more of Sam and Kevin and the loving they share. I am sure these days with genetic screening its ok for siblings to make babies. I was a bit taken aback by Kelly's advice. Keep going please.

Could have been the perfect brother / sister coming of age story with an older woman but it turned weird the last couple of pages.

OMG, this story is so good. I wanted it to keep going and see how their new relationship developed. Thank you for giving this to us.

Oh, but there will be more, much more, yes???

That. Was. Intense. Loved it. I really enjoyed how in the end it was all about Kevin and Sam to. Excellent writing.

Great writing, horny and dirty as hell. I love it that you don’t know where the story is going to go. The fertile mind is strong in this one!

Spectacular

A very well written story. I was just curious if you planned on continuing the story?

OMG! I really loved this.

WOW! What a great story! I sincerely hope you give us more chapters.

What a hot story. I had to stop reading 3 times because I kept on cumming!

Fantastic story! And dammit, you got me hungry for Blue Moon - haven't eaten there in a couple of years... :)

Very nasty. Very romantic. Very sweet. Very naughty. Part of me doesn’t want a sequel. Part of me does. You decide.

That was one of the most believable stories I've ever read. Great character development. No sudden changes in character. Lots of possibilities and things that didn't happen - just like real life. Really great writing.

Once Kelly found Kevin it got hot and stayed hot to the end. Romantic, naughty and sweet as well. Liked the structure but was confused as to why Kelly wanted Kevin and then Sam until the sex club was brought up but that's been left in the air - I can envisage a series if you have the mind to do so as they explore their sexuality with and without the sex club. 5 ⛤.

Best one I have read in a long, long time.

Wow! What a hot story

And just think, Kevin could have spent his vacation reading novels at his parents' beach house. What a letdown that would have been. Great story, by the way. Good luck in the contest.

"This was a summer to remember." A bit of an understatement! A very good read. My only complaint is that I never got a full sense of what Kelly and Sam look like, but that's a minor point, probably not that important to many people. If you do continue with these characters, I hope you set the story several years in their future, let the readers fill in some of the blanks.

I wonder how the parents private night to themselves went. I wonder if there's any chance they have a kinky side. It's a big world.

That was some very fine writing, an exciting summer indeed.

Outstanding - Loved it !!

Once again, another fantastic story from a great author. Can't wait to read about their future exploits.

Beautifully written , what more can i say . PERFECT

Excellent story and very erotic. The believable part suffered when Sam said she was on the PILL!

Outstanding story, wonderfully written and told.....looking forward to reading storied of the club........():\

Outstanding!

Hope there’s part 2,3, more to come!

5 stars for sexy but it was a bit manipulative to prey on the teens that way. They’re 18 and 19 but recording it for a club (sharing it)?? That’s a pretty large step from “can I see your cock?” Is this human trafficking?

What a lucky boy

Hi Lana,

This story has been copied and is being sold on Amazon. You can get Amazon to take it down, there is a link down the page to report copyright violations. The 'author' John Xie had two of my stories for sale as well. Amazon took them down immediately when I complained. Here is the link to your story

https://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B0B5N1B1HB?ref_=dbs_m_mng_rwt_calw_tkin_9&storeType=ebooks&qid=1656958002&sr=1-6&asin=B0B5N1B1HB&revisionId=&format=4&depth=1

This was a very well-written and thought out story. My only complaint, small as it may be, is that the story ended three pages too soon. The brother and sister's coming together should be explained as to what happens further down the line...

You seem to have a talent for this genre. Please write more.

Another interesting story ruined by the sudden introduction of ass sex. I guess that's your personal fetish so I'll be moving on to another writer.

Lost me on page 1. If she is laying on her BACK, how can her breasts be bunched underneath her???????

Wow, those poor kids, sucked into a life of exploitation. Of course they wanted sex, but this predator Kelly found them and took these innocents into her sex world, just like that. Hope their Dad and Mom find out and find a way to torture and kill Kelly.