All Comments on 'Over the Sink Ch. 03'

this story just keeps getting better and better. what a sexual frenzy.i like the concept of the sink, kinda different. i await the next chapter.

I'm looking forward to the next chapters. I find it hard to believe that obviously without any birth control that none of the three women have been getting fucked this much and obviously through their fertile monthly periods, have missed their monthly period by now. Perhaps in a future chapter?

Definately one of the best stories i have ever read!!!

Looking forward to the next chapter1

Your story is great and obviously there is a lot more potential. Its been 3 months since your last update and I really hope you'll continue and not leave us readers "hanging"!

this has been a great story, but we need more, please finish it....I hope they all end up fucking each other in a mass orgy and wether the son wants it or not he definitely needs some daddy cock in his mouth....its about time someone tied him up hehe. Keep writing, great work :)

One of my favorite stories on here. Hope to see more chapters coming soon!

The concept of the sink is a refreshingly unique to most mindless sex stories. I am wondering who will get Sally first if that was just a dream. Will the Father and Son come to blows in conflict, or will they just decide to split the 'ample' riches?

People keep asking me for a sequel, and I really would like to give you parts 4 and 5 (and a spinoff series as well). The only problem is that I haven't been able to get myself to write anything for the last few months. I have a few dozen stories all sitting in limbo waiting for me to get my ass in gear.

Add to that my stories have been fighting me, trying to force the characters to move along their path faster than I want them to, and I am having troubles getting anything done.

There will be a part 4 and 5, but it could be a long while. I have not given up though. You just have to be patient (really really patient).

Use it. Then use the dictionary to confirm that the word you used (and spelled correctly) was the word you wanted.

This is the best story I have ever read....I await the next chapter...

I loved this story, it was great but once the mother and father got involved it kind of turned me off the story.

It ws getting hot with the fact he was "doing" his sister's but it's only my opinions (no-one else's) i hate stories that include the mother or father.

Don't know why but stories about mother's and father's don't do anything for me atall, i can't stind them they make me sick. Other than that though i loved everything about this story (chapters) bar the parents

can't stand***

the goats, pigs, and grandma Jojo and grandpa Larry Flint? <p>

as one of the previous posters said, keep a taboo story taboo; don't mix it with orgies and gang bang and poodle shit and such! <p>

taboo stories are taboo, erotic, exciting BECAUSE they are, well, taboo, which if found out, can embarrass those who engage in them endlessly, deeply. <p>

but if you gonna write a story in which every family remember, including the dog and pig and goat and grandma and grandpa are happily fucking, like those cheap $5 porn DVDs,,,, WHERE IS THE thrill, the eroticism, the PROHIBITION and TABOO? None! Why not? Because they are unbelievable CHARACTERS having unbelievable sex all over, everywhere,,, <p>

hell, even if you use REAL humans, like those real porn people, there's no thrill, no eroticism, because all of them start and end the same way: the blonde screams fakely like a pig being killed, from beginning to end, with the big brother doing nothing but see-saw his thing in and out, in and out, in and out, every 30 seconds, putting in her her mouth, over and over and over,,, making one dizzy watching it more than a few minutes....

OMG that was the best story i have ever read on this site, I've read this story 5 times now and only now have i got up the guts to add a comment.

Well, you really need to edit your stories. That said, this is one fuckin' hot story! Keep it going!

Please write more.

on the edge of my seat for the next chapter

was it really just a dream or could it be a precognition?

don't make me wait too long!

keep going. great story, more more more

Every chapter has been fantastic keep going i hope to see some HLA soon

This is one hot story anyway. Can't wait to read Ch. 4!<br><br>You have a good writing style. Very descriptive and erotic. Could fix a few typos, but the hotness of the story compensates for that minor issue. Great work!

loved the story.

but please continue it.

my sister and i had great fun reading it ...

holy shit you know how to write!

Wow you can write.I didnt see sally bend over the sink?But it was great.keep writting.cant wait for chapter 4

Very nice, my friend! Keep up the good work, we are looking for new talent!

I loved the story. You are very creative, but the wrong spelling and bad grammar are very distracting.

Nice story line, fantastic. Would really make a great plot for a movie.

Only thing I'd like to comment on is I hope that you leave Matt as the 'alpha'.

i think it was a very good story the spelling could have been better and was a little dissapointed at the ending i hope there will be a chapter 4

interesting storyline, hope you will continue eventually.

interesting storyline, hope you will continue eventually.

interesting storyline, hope you will continue eventually.

Nice read and i sure hope you'll continue the story. I'll give a full review when it's done...

umm...well there was one sentence with the word "waste" which is meant to be spelt "waist", yet using "waste" made it sound hilarious. "his arms wrapped around her waste" - gross. =P

I don't really like dad-daughter, makes me sick. but you're the author. son-sister-mom is kool...or maybe I read much erotica it makes me sick. =D

I think it's just what goes through the dads mind...that I don't like. - Story's without a dad I like =P but like I said, You're the author.

Can't wait for Matt and Sally to get it on???

Goodwork, enjoying it and keep it up... soo goodnight. :)

P.S. Sorry I got no hints tips. :)

Two active males in a story is simply one too many. Liked the two first parts, but this part was huge disappointment by trying to satisfy everybody.

great story hope u finish it soon

family fuckfest that grow out of a b/s or m/s affair just destroy the love they are founded on

Why did you include the father?? That ruined a great story. You can't make everyone happy, so please stop trying. Less people=more fun and a better story. The sisters, the mother and Matt would have been okay, but to include the father made it into a swapping, swingers nightmare.

Stop with the father. He doesn't fit in your story. It's about Matt and his sisters and mother. From chapter 1 they all wants Matt and then in this chapter we learn that Jen and Sally want their father too. Where did that come from? He was out of the picture so far and it was great that way. Don't ruin a good story.

What is it with some authors and swinging it ruins a great story NEVER put another guy into the picture it makes the story less interesting, enjoyable and sexy

I kinda agree with setsuna yet the fact that the father hadn't done anything with the daughters can still save the mood maybe something like the father gets wasted and tries to fool with the older daughter only to have her stop him and her realize she wants to have sex with her brother like the other female family members

I was always planning on bringing the father into the fray. I really love incestuous gangbang DP stories. They are my favorites.

keep it to Matt becoming the alpha male of the family. The dad just came out of nowhere

I have to agree with some of the others in that the father shouldn't get control of the sons harem. There are rules that should be followed in harem 'power struggles'. The son got the girls because he was not only the stud but he also is using a bit of his wits to make sure more than one of the girls are his without them freaking out completely, but to have the father 'inherit' any of them without doing any work would be a major let down. I would like the son to at least own Jenny and Julie, while the father MIGHT have a chance to win over Sally. Having 2 alphas isn't that good.

the author hasn't put in a new story in over 3 years, so it'll prolly just get forgotten like a lot of the other good stories.

The first 2 chapters are great but I won't read this I stopped 2 paragraphs in. Don't care about the father at all

I loved the whole story line and did not mind the dad coming into at all! I am interested to know where the power struggle will lead and to see if anyone else gets caught in this webb. PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY!!

I remember trying to read another of your stories that I did not like so much. This was much better and I hope that I catch the continuation when I cruise the stories again. Thank you for writing.

Now dad's in on the action, I know Sally is only the beginning. Pretty soon nobody's going to want to leave the house, including Steve. Matt has to be having the best summer of his life with all the pussy he's getting! Once he finally fucks Sally, his conquest will be complete. Eventually, Matt and Steve will need to decide where they will put another sink. They should also make up a rotating schedule so everyone gets their fucking fill!

Are you going to write a chapter 4?

Loved it!

Chapter 4, when?

Next chapter???

I'm still around. Honestly, I don't like what I wrote in this chapter and was considering rewriting it. I just haven't been in the headspace for this particular story in a long time though. It's not looking likely that I will be any time soon either. Sorry.

The only bad thing about this is there's no next chapter yet xD

this story would be flawless if only you really should have left the dad out of this kinda killed it

Yep. You should have rewrote it that's for sure. Bringing Dad in also was a killer for me. 1*

rewrite to keep Dad out. please make the sisters and mom aware of the fucking. also, we need impregnation. there is nothing hotter than a brother/son nocking up their mother/sisters.

Keep this series cumming!

We were having fun with the son fantasy. Dad adds nothing to the story. Also would have added a different element if dad had been having affairs on his trips, so Julie's acts were sweet revenge.

Was going great…..until dad included. Would prefer not have him involved. Him having an affair would have been better. Getting the sisters pregnant would be great as well

Leave dad out. Didnt even read it once I saw the tag that he was involved