All Comments on 'Overly Familiar Pt. 02 Ch. 02'

I love it when an author can inject humor as well as sex into the story.

That explains the hunting. Really loving this so far. Excellent work.

The previous chapter was a good introduction, but I was waiting to see some action happening. This chapter really delivered on that! Great story writing as always!

Curious about matts parents...

Matt's eyes narrowed to see no one there. "We've got a rabbit."

Mara's eyes lit up in excitement. "I guess I should be vewwy vewwy quiet then."

Flippin' Funny!

This is developing into an interesting world, I'm really starting to enjoy it.

So that ungrateful goddess bitch literally raped matt by forcefully kissing him after he said “no” so many times. Also if a guy continuously sexually harassed a girl like that then it would be on like donkey kong.

I only bring this up since you seem to be all into hat consent bullshit where a gym has to get verbal consent for every step. “ I’m going to min fuck yo without consent and I won’t stop when you ask.” Look if you just said “ I’ll fix your mind and you’ll thank me later” then fine as that’s normal. But saying the word ‘consent’ just makes is woke crap on a porn site predominantly for males.

Also to fuck the bitch goddesses off just say “ I’ll have an equal favour to your life in the future. Before and after that discover yourself and live your existence to its fullest.” Then 30 seconds later when the sexual harassment starts say “ I’m calling in my favour now. My favour is saving my current life, lifestyle, sanity and making it possible to save other muses. So to do this favour you must honour the original agreement and then stop harassing me for sex to be my new familiar.”

Job done.

Lol I find myself intensely curious how you're going to react to Aphrodite if that's how you feel about Ishara. Same with another character later that has a bit of a flimsy relationship with consent. Speaking of which, if you think Matt is an overly consenting character, you might enjoy "Corrupted Desire" and "Learn Your Place".

Your writing style is brilliant. The banter between characters is priceless.

Modern tech with deities is wonderful.

Like the American gods saga.

Really enjoying it. Thanks for your works