All Comments on 'Owned'
by SpiceNWolf
- 15 Comments
Black_Jadeover 8 years agoWonderful story!I always love stories with a tender caring dom. I do wish he spoke to her at the airport and disscussed things before hoping right in. I think that would have alieviated some of her fears and made her feel safer since she is meeting him for the first time. I did like how you explained that Colin is not her idea of a typical dom; however, I feel like there were too many paragraphs devoted to that lone sentiment at the beginning of the story. One paragraph was fine, it's good to know that her ideals didnt work out in the real world. Still, this is a wonderful.story. I look forward to reading more of your work!
Goodiegoodie88over 8 years agoWell done. Very well done. I want to hear more about these two in the future.
GemmaGreyover 8 years ago"Not once did I encounter a woman like me. I was sure of what I wanted, and had no illusions. I needed to be dominated and owned. I just wasn't so sure how to go about getting my heart's desire."
Heroines generally do fight submission at first, I love that she, like me, knows she wants it and doesn't want to fight it. Will there be more?
GrrrreatImaginationalmost 6 years agoExcellent storytelling. A well written memoir.
Submission is both external and internal. It can be slipped into from either direction, but both must exist simultaneously to say that one has arrived. You expressed the exquisite tension she felt trying to wiggle herself in. It was so pleasing to witness her arrival.
I was verrrry pleased with your story, and am glad you chose to share your talent and skill with all the readers here. Wherever you may go, please find ways to share your writing -whatever topic, whichever venue.
As I was writing this, I found myself wondering... what was the journey like from Colin's point of view?
Be well.
SpiceNWolfover 5 years agoAuthorThanks to all for the kind words. We have just started our own wordpress blog, which is where we're likely to post now. Wolfsspice.
