All Comments on 'Owning Avery Ch. 05'

Amazing tale. The whole situation is fantasy, but you create a lot of believability within that, which I guess is one mark of good fiction. Excellent in defining the personalities of the three. You convey the inner feelings nd thoughts of both the male and female characters. It's interesting to think that three people could have that much sex in that short a time without being absolutely knackered. I'm eager to read some more of your contributions.