All Comments on 'Pact'

by WFEATHER

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Well now !

I quite liked it because you dared to be different .Very nice .

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
At the end of the story....

..."filling in"... for each other was a nice touch.

oldwayneoldwayneover 15 years ago
A Little Different...

But a good read. Thanks for sharing it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
unique

This was unique........the theme was different and so was the narration style.......i liked it a lot....i truly did

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
nice

continue the story

TwilightfanTwilightfanover 12 years ago
Lucky!!!

I wish my brother had so considerate {sp}, gentle, careing and loving my first time... Talk about a lucky girl!!! Please, Please, Please continue with the story, you can't just leave it there. It's screaming for more!!!

HonorandLoveHonorandLovealmost 12 years ago
These twins need to end up in love together, and stay together. The friend needs to disappear

Let them fall in love together, with the sacred gift of virginity sealing them irrevocably together for life. That is true love.

OleguyOleguyabout 11 years ago
Like WOW !

Totally unusual approach which just goes to show your expertise.

You do incest so well.

TwilightfanTwilightfanover 10 years ago
Ch. 2

I know that you wrote this story a few year's ago, but I'd LOVE to read a 2nd chapter to the story...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Sooooo well done!

Written with a wonderful and truly believable sensitivity. I hope you write more for us to enjoy.

mjostomjostoover 6 years ago
More

I enjoyed the story and the writing. Would love a continuation of this story

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Wonderful!

OMG, what great style.... just wonderful!

AmazonBeauty1966AmazonBeauty1966over 5 years ago
Wish

I do so wish to find more of this highly erotic, well written beautiful story. My bet is the one naysayer en comment is the dork ... I so enjoy your writing Sir, thank you.

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