by WFEATHER
I quite liked it because you dared to be different .Very nice .
..."filling in"... for each other was a nice touch.
This was unique........the theme was different and so was the narration style.......i liked it a lot....i truly did
I wish my brother had so considerate {sp}, gentle, careing and loving my first time... Talk about a lucky girl!!! Please, Please, Please continue with the story, you can't just leave it there. It's screaming for more!!!
Let them fall in love together, with the sacred gift of virginity sealing them irrevocably together for life. That is true love.
Totally unusual approach which just goes to show your expertise.
You do incest so well.
I know that you wrote this story a few year's ago, but I'd LOVE to read a 2nd chapter to the story...
Written with a wonderful and truly believable sensitivity. I hope you write more for us to enjoy.
I enjoyed the story and the writing. Would love a continuation of this story
I do so wish to find more of this highly erotic, well written beautiful story. My bet is the one naysayer en comment is the dork ... I so enjoy your writing Sir, thank you.