All Comments on 'Paid to Seduce His Mother V. 02 Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
don't get it ?

where is the rest ? This story is no different than the first one . just less pages

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
wtf????????????

This is not an alternative ending - just left off in the middle of the original story.

one star.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichalmost 11 years ago
A great story

I haven't read the first story that has been referred to , but this story so far is very good.

I hope to see more soon.

Thanks for the read.

redlion75redlion75almost 11 years ago

writer said end of next chapter implying things were the same til after daughter gets daddy alone or atleast after dinner

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Boring !!!!

It took you five pages tp say nothing, except that he felt his mother's breasts. BORING

pegaseus69pegaseus69almost 11 years ago

Great story. I love the build up. I didn't read the first version but after finishing these chapters I'm gonna read it as well just to compare endings.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

what a disappointment, I thought this story would have a slow build up, instead the mother just give in to the idea of having sex with her son without so much inhibitions. Couldn't finish reading past page 3. 1/5

Foxterot7aFoxterot7aover 1 year ago

As an avid reader of incestuous love stories, I appreciate indepth character development. I like plots that are logically developed. I like authors that know hiw to use the English language and do not resort to gutter language whenever possible. Finally, I like lovers who respect and care for each other's emotions and mental well being. Although the mother may seem "easy" after 10-15 years without physical love, it is easy to believe that she would be flattered if a man recognized her as an attractive, sensually and sexually pleasing woman, even if it is her son.

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