All Comments on 'Paid to Seduce His Mother V. 02 Ch. 09'

now he is being an ass. after talking to vie and the other ladies saying they need to talk he fucks the first pussy to bare itself.

I thought the time with Evie was going to be touching, but I was partially wrong. She did help him through it, he was a total dog. Now hes out of the coma all the nurses want in? Hes a dog just in it for the pussy, nothing even remotely showing a changed person from all Evie had shared with him. I still love the story, But Im getting tired of Mikes dick in the wind attitude, if the wind blow pussy past his dick, its in it without a thought or regard to his women. ty JB / bill;

...until now Mike has been pretty upfront with all his extracurricular activities and everyone was good with things as they were, but, speaking for myself, if this drastic change in his character isn't explained and rectified fairly quickly, I can guarantee one reader will lose interest pretty fast, and I wouldn't bet against more. This was another 5 star story till the last part, which dragged it down to a 3.

Personally I felt this story took a turn for the worst when Evie died and how quick the new girlfriend was added to the group but it did manage to still hold my interest. Sadly now it's going downhill fast with Mike turning into a complete fucking asshole in how he acted with Evie in limbo and then how he was so quick to hook up with the nurse.

Such a shame.

keep it going man....you are doing a great job. i love how this story has gone so far cant wait for the next installment

Interesting and enjoyable, as Always, However I'm thinking that Mike is becoming a bit of a "ManSlut" which is unbecoming of the persona that he was prior to his coma. Maybe it is just a function of 3 or 4 months of forced celibacy needing to release all the pent-up Cum, and he will spend the next 24 hours taking care of the nurses, then go Home to his Loving Harem and be true to only them!! Good Read!!

Well thought out, well written, and the best story I have EVER read on this, or any other, site. Congratulations! -Randy in St. Pete, FL

Logically written to thin out the herd and put some of the minor characters back in their box. I hpoe the characterof Michael has emotionally and mentally matured while in coma. Hopefully he will be more open/free with Sara.