by neonlyte
Congratulations, Neo. This piece is unique from all other EC stories that I've read (not counting "Fibonacci's Window" by Shang, of course). It dares to be different, presents another view of what is erotic without the usual "wham-bam" formula.
You voice comes across as an artist, the words showing visuals that are bright and vibrant. Incredible.
Neon has a style that is deliciously original. Subtle, teasing, but direct when needed. Great story! North Coast
You need to go back to basics. I hope this was only a trial balloon, because it doesn't work
The story held my attention but perhaps by confusion. I liked it enough to read it but not really crazy about it because I'm not an artist. That might help.
There is a discomfort here, and a challenge to the reader that marks your writing as quality. Thanks to Selena_Kitt for the recommendation