All Comments on 'Painting A Nude: The Undressing'

by neonlyte

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Selena_KittSelena_Kittalmost 18 years ago
Lovely!

Beautiful, intriguing, surprising, hot... a lovely piece!

Aurora BlackAurora Blackalmost 18 years ago
Provocative

Congratulations, Neo. This piece is unique from all other EC stories that I've read (not counting "Fibonacci's Window" by Shang, of course). It dares to be different, presents another view of what is erotic without the usual "wham-bam" formula.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Unique at the least

You voice comes across as an artist, the words showing visuals that are bright and vibrant. Incredible.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Wonderfully Different

Neon has a style that is deliciously original. Subtle, teasing, but direct when needed. Great story! North Coast

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Confused and poorly written

You need to go back to basics. I hope this was only a trial balloon, because it doesn't work

WatcherRobWatcherRobover 9 years ago
confusing

The story held my attention but perhaps by confusion. I liked it enough to read it but not really crazy about it because I'm not an artist. That might help.

RangeExpanderRangeExpanderalmost 5 years ago
More quality than ease

There is a discomfort here, and a challenge to the reader that marks your writing as quality. Thanks to Selena_Kitt for the recommendation

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