All Comments on 'Pakistani Daughter'

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GrimbrattGrimbrattover 6 years ago

At some point the father needs to find out and then deal with the two of them. Good story. Looking towards the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Amazing!

More more more!

betathingbetathingover 6 years ago
Lovely

Another superb contribution. Thank you! The theme is wonderful and done in an excellent and interesting manner. I look forward to more, but then I am greedy.

TomatobottomTomatobottomover 6 years ago
Fun

It was enjoyable. You have sketched the humiliation sequences quite expertly. I'd love to it continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
more please

too hot theme

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
best one

It is good story , best so far , Is Mom Sent Back to School story end???

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
super story

Please update more

rushkidrushkidalmost 6 years ago
More pls

Next chapter pls

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When you send an email enter an email address for a reply. I will often write a story by request. You will find more of my stories on Smashwords, by Gary Bingham Thank you to all on Literotica for the opportunity to publish stories and for readers comments as that has improv...