All Comments on 'Paperback Writer'

Nicely written and held my interest. The ending was a complete surprise. Loved it!

You're as bad as me. What a great story. Full of sex and with a marvelous ending. Patti

again. This was a great little story for the Thanksgiving weekend. You never cease to bring your stories to a very fine ending. What a great little twist. Totally agree with Patricia51.

George

Your stories are always REAL stories with a genuine plot and told with rare humour. Loved the twist in this one. Keep 'em coming!

It's good to read a "loving wife" story that actually has a loving wife in it. I like that she spiced up her marriage instead of having an affair. I am sure that the husband will be very attentive to her for quite some time.

Keep up the great work. Thank you for your time and effort in writing this story.

One of the funniest and most human stories on this site. You have such a light touch with this story that I immediately wanted to read it again after the first sitting. It was a masterful piece of writing.

WoW! What an excellent story..

Nice pacing, great sex, spiced up marriage, and better yet..... NO CHEATING!!!!!!

What a fucking great ending, had us all fooled....

THANKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I loved how it ended, that was nice.

Terrific ending! The idea of Nancy/Lil actually crawling into bed in the middle of the night instead of his wife isn't very plausible. But the writing is good. The sexual escapades are interesting, but could benefit from some more detailed, graphic description.

And finding a story that catches my interest, is realistic and doesn't go out of its way to humiliate the husband is so rare. I'm almost ready to quit looking for them. So few writers are interested in looking for something other than the cliche.

I have one quibble. I have no problem that this was planned by the wife. Early on something was telling me the women were aware the conversations in the kitchen were being monitered by the husband. I'm not sure why, perhaps because of the twist it would give, maybe that the conversations were too graphic. My problem is with the way the reader was informed of the twist. Since the husband was doing the talking and you gave him no way to be aware of what had gone on it was completely illogical.

I enjoyed your well written , cleverly innovative story. The sex scenes were exciting and erotic but the plot was just a little too far fetched to be believable.Even though this as a fantasy story to set up an electronics convention or even a booth at a convention, hire an actress for 2 or 3 days and find a miniature remote video microphone would cost a fortune. Considering the fact that the husband's major complaint was wife's lack of interest in sex, why didn't she just get sexy without all the folderal? the Ct Yankee

Well Done - Nice flow and twist - You are appreciated and a erotic writer who holds our interest without making us uncomfortable with unrealistic situations.

More please

Thanks and Regards

And another great story. I'll be looking forward to your next one. Great job.

I enjoyed reading this. A great fun read. Hope to read more by Harddaysknight. Thanks!

You do realise you will be banned from literotica soon if you keep writing good stories without any cheating in them, don't you??

Along with some other critics, I find it hard to believe a husband would not know he was with his wife just because she had a different perfume on, BUT it was sort of convincing enough for the purpose of the story.

Also the method of letting us in on the 'secret' could maybe have been done differently.

Don was obviously ready to go further with their sex life, so why didn't she just do a bit of communicating herself? But, once again, the story held out as it was, sort of tongue in cheek anyways.

Great read.

A really great twist makes it a great story. You and Patti are getting good at that.

Some hot sex and it wasn't cheating, after all. I think it's geat she wanted to find the 'key' to their sex life. Sometimes couples just can't express themselves to each other.

I got to wondering how they figured out where he hid the camera. I would have chosen the living room, I think. I guess it's simple---they turned the TV on. LOL

Thought the woman was Lil? One major thing like perfume can warp your thinking like that. Although why her pussy should feel so much tighter I can't imagine except he's fooling himself with imagination. Powerful thing imagination!!

Made a really great story with that twist and hot sex.

His imagination carried him to believe it was Lil.

Powerful thing imagination.

Intriguing story line and good sex!!!

"Her name was McGill. She called herself Lil, but everyone knew her as Nancy!"

Rocky Raccoon from the Beatles White Album.

Great story!!

I loved this story! The twist at the end made it all the better.

I rhought this the bwst of your stories I've read. I started at the top of the list.

Great Job! I loved the plot! Your stories have the best twists! Please continue to write like this! I only wish for just a few more details when the sex is occuring.

These kind of stories are 5's all the way! I wish there were more talented writers with YOUR kind of talent and insight!

Love this kind of writing!

Sexmate

Great story. Funny, sexy and neat twist at end. Write a lot more like it! Gosh, I didn't think anyone remembered those old George Burns shows. Weren't they great?

Thanks for writing and sharing this story. You made the characters believable. It is a fun read. I prefer a bit more detail in the sexual acts ... but your approach is like a descriptive tease. It makes me anxious for more. This is the first story of yours that I have read and it was good. Again, thanks for sharing it.

Good story line. Good character development. I liked the fact that there wasn’t any "nasty stuff" in this story. It would not have fit the story.

The moral of the story is that we all need "a wake up call" sometime in our lives.

Glad that Don got his in time.

Ending not logical.

it was a sweet story with a nice twist.

it is strange though, that the uptight wife who was the 'clamp' holding their marriage back so long was the one to hire them.

Great set-up.

Great story.

And as for Anonymous' concern for being logical . . . try reading Aristotle's Analytica Priora. . .

HDK does it again, only this time the wife pulls the strings and does so so brilliantly. The chat Don first intercepts between Lil & Loretta is not all that "out there" for a couple of dear old friends. But, I must admit, if I was in Don's shoes and hearing all that was being said, I would be down the stairs as fast as possible to immediatly and "accidentally" walk into the middle of the talk; pretending, of course, that I "overheard" something that upset me. But then, this isn't real, and I'm not the author here. . .

The best hint that something isn't quite right was when Loretta addressed Lil as Nancy; she has to scramble to get out of that one in a hurry. Fortunately for Loretta, Don's not quite all that aware.

You demonstrate that the most powerful erogenous zone is the area between the ears. And let's hope we all are so lucky as to have as wonderfully scheming and manipulative a wife as Loretta is for Don.

constantly surprise me with the way you think. I'm sure there's a place somewhere that can help you with that...lol. Fantastic story.

You caught me flat footed on that one.

Good story & well written

Why would an author so very skilled in the art of writting cheating wife stories want to write a piece of shit like this?

This blasted story is nothing but one huge conspiracy against a loving husband!

<P>

And thank goodness for that. :D Well done, HDK.

A very funny story. Catering perfectly to the male ego!

Can’t really believe I’ve missed this one! Ok! Lesson learned, it never hurts to double check the stories’ list of one’s favorite authors periodically. <P>

So, here we go. I have a challenge for the aficionados of classic erotica (even if not titled as such). What classic erotic story does this story bears high resemblance to? My only hint is that the resemblance between the two is only partial; nevertheless it is very distinctive. <P>

I have made my very favorite view of the practice (intentional or not) of adopting classic themes and/or plots from either a known author or when a theme/plot have been circulating many times around the block; exchanging versions in the process – to the delight of all ). Any one who may have read for some time any type of stories in one genre is bound to realize after a while that there is a limited number of themes/plots on which numerous variations and updates are being made. So why not choose a good source to begin with? Nothing is taken away from one’s originality, as most original plots are subconscious replications of prior reading – both thematically and stylistically. We can’t help but draw upon something…. <P>

Have you thought of the story yet? Let me know if you want to know, or put your guess/answer see if our literary allusion overlap!

BTW, have I mentioned that the story was great yet? It was great. Thanks.

that was fun, and erotic. love the twist.

great job!

fandamtastic ........... rich

This story gave me few ideas...

Basically it steps back and sees the basic rhythmns of life cutting away all the formalisms that tangle up out lives.

Great story. Love the Rocky Raccoon names used in it...

I enjoyed the twist at the end of the story. Keep up the good work.

I found it enjoyable, but i was confused as to how he thought he was fucking Lil/Nancy when it was his wife, he clearly mentions things about her that are different. And I also found the ending a bit pointless seeing as it was lorreta's fault they had a bad sex life, she paid money for strangers to do something she could have achieved just by talking to husband and putting out more. She also doesn't seem to care that her husband doesn't care about the fact that he cheated on her(Even tough he technically didn't, He thinks he did)

One of the best!!!!!!!!!!!

He felt her body and she was different from his wife, so what exactly happened ?

Good story, Perhaps Miss Rigby (Eleanor) and Father Mckenzie, will be the subject of your next story.

I just found out. You've already written a story about Eleanor and Father Mckenzie. I have'nt read it/them yet. A story about lonely people, I presume. I'm off to read another of your stories now, perhaps a good wank is in store for me!

I liked that Don did not have sex with Lil/Nancy, But the intent was there (not good).

Other wise I loved the story. Wish all stories were that good.

Thank You

where's Rocky Raccoon though?

Well done and you got me that time - i had about c0nvinced myself the girls knew about the camera then gave it up - well done -

I realize you don't give a shit but this story but this story sounds like some cunt with a dripping pussy wrote it. Take your panties off and put you boxers back on. But it was well written.

But the idea of two people who are supposed to love and trust one another spying on and manipulating one another is somewhat distasteful to me.

But was the husband REALLY that stupid?

This was really entertaining and well written to boot. I thoroughly enjoyed this story; especially the ending was magnificent.

I can't help but think how much more interesting it could have been if at some point Nancy had just said something like, "Have you tried TALKING to your husband...?" I mean the idea that a woman would complain about the things her husband won't do after having spent years telling him she won't do them... and that situation exactly whose fault is it he doesn't ask about doing them...? Even husbands can only stand being shot down so many times...

funny ending but why would she not just talk to her husband instead of probably spending alot of money on this setup

I agree with those who say the wife should just TALK to her husband.

Particularly the stuff like the husband supposedly doesn't want blow jobs (?!) that SHE refuses to give!

But I wonder if he took the whole thing farther and had set up recording devices in the house. Discovered she had played him and wasn't happy about that fact. Maybe more than upset that she wouldn't just talk to him. In fact, maybe he was pissed off that she hadn't talked to him and instead had decided to manipulate him. And then wonder how often she had manipulated him in the past. And then dumped her ass.

I'll give it five stars. Surreal and numerous. A fun read. Thanks.

Anyone THAT curious might have placed addition spy devices. What happens if he discovers the truth? That might make an interesting chapter 2!

Wives should be sneaky and underhanded to get what they want, instead of straightforward and honest...

A great story with a great twist. I should arrange for my husband to get a camera lol.

Nice twist and a clever tribute to Rocky Raccoon.

I actually didn't like the twist, I liked it better straight!

the twist is kinda a letdown, it was hotter when I though he got to fuck and impress Lil also.

The wife pays someone to help set him up for the sex that SHE was not interested in anyway. The way the husband is portrayed he is not getting enough from her, but the "loving wife" needs to deceive and MANIPULATE him for sex. How could he NOT know the pussy taste the same as his wifes ? WTF, this little lie will come out sooner or later and he will realize what a bitch she is and say bye bye.LIAR

Really fun. 4 stars.

no way that could have been set up as described. Bob and Lil indeed.

As I read the story, I kept telling myself over and over, if I were a successful writer, what I had learned from the spy cam in that one room would have spurred me to go to Radio Shack and purchase other audio/video recording devices and place them all over the house. No area of the house would be off limits. Not even her car. I would be able to listen in to her phone conversations, as well. Her conversations with Lil/Nancy were hurtful; especially her revelation that she was considering having an affair. As I said, an absolutely marvelous story; but I can tell from other comments that I am not the only one who feels that more spy equipment is necessary. I am going out this evening and start buying such devices for my home.

Oh you sneaky author, you fooled me again. You took an old story line and changed it with a clever ending. Thanks for the smiles. BK

You tell a lot of lies

A wife won't simply talk with her husband but will spend big bucks to let him know. She shouldn't be allowed out of the house by herself.

I was totally fooled by the ending! It was hilarious and added greatly to my enjoyment of this story! My jaw hurts from smiling. Love the wife's responses. Wish I had one like her.

Humorous and poignant at the same time. Loved the twist at the end, although I smelled it coming earlier. Wives are too clever by far for we simple minded husbands!

Glad that Loretta and Don are getting some fine sack time now!

When a marriage is in a rut someone has to make a change or its doomed. Loretta didn't know how to bring the changes about, but obtained help. They were able to step outside of the box and have better and more passionate sex than ever before. This was a great read and hopefully will give someone an idea of what to do with their marriage.

This is a very fun and erotic story. Actually got hard reading it and smiling more than once.

"If he responds and shows some fire, I will do it." - If he does, then there's no NEED to do it!

I still don't get her complaining about not getting the sex that SHE refuses!

I wonder what your marriage is like, if you've ever been married. Why is it you always have the women outsmarting the men? They're always so much more clever, always several steps ahead of their drooling befuddled husbands. Are you sure you're a man?

The wife wanted more and varied sex even though the only reason she wasnt getting it is because she kept telling her husband no?

Why didnt she just NOT rebuff her husband to begin with?

Definitely enjoyed this one... poor clueless husband, but he definitely benefited!

Sorry you didn't actually fuck Nancy -- oh well, maybe some other time. Smile. 5*

Good spoof but hardly likely! 5*s, nonetheless.

That was a good one. Great twist at the end. Damn womens be devious.

Second time around on your stories, this was a great fun read yet again, I’ll give another year or two to read yet again then maybe again and maybe once or twice more or so, Just 5⭐️, Thanks. P.

Now she knows he will cheat on her. What could possibly go wrong? 🙄

Cool. Didn't see that end coming.

anyone catch the song lyrics from rocky racoon ?

Hot wife no panties

And when rapist is let off by jury

Don't know recently but know of cases where actually happened as defense convinced jury she dressed as slut so was asking for it

Other side police treat women dressed like that differently and not better

Agree or disagree it is fact

I still have a need to point out what i consider to be flaws :)

1. The fact that Don everhears his wife basically say that the only reason she hasn't had an affair is because a good opportunity hasnt presented itself yet. And Don has no concern over this, yes we learn that loretta is just acting, but Don doesnt know that. He just doesnt care that his wife would cheat on him??

2. The twist in the end is yes unexpected, but also strange, since I don't know why she could just talk to her husband if she wanted to improve there sexlife... According to him she didnt have any interest in sex, so she clearly is the one who killed there sexlife.

A really fun read.

Enjoyable loving wife's story.

I doubt Don would even care that he got conned!

HDK has so many great stories, it's hard to just go through them all, but every time I pick one out, I find myself wanting to read another and another. As usual, another great read with a twist of humor. Thanks.

It seems like a better approach would be better communicating with your spouse. It sounded like he wanted the same things but had given up on her.

Cute story, but isn't it more meaningful, and even sexier, if your wife speaks to you directly and encourages a greater degree of intimacy?

The ends justify the means. Sneaky but effective.

These HDK stories are great, and always with a little humor thrown in.

I don't care for the twist. If Loretta was so interested in sex, but thought wasn't, why was she rebuffing his advances to the point that he stopped trying?

Very entertaining , and funny ! 5 stars

"I had never heard a woman talk about being fucked, unless it was the auto repair place doing it".

Don't eat carrots when you read harddaysknight. You may choke on them. 5*

Sorry, I figured that one a bit early; when the wife received the call from an old college roommate,

you just had to put that twist in, didn't you. it sucked.