All Comments on 'Papergirl'

Very erotic. For once a story got put on Literotica on a teenager less than 18 y.o.uu

well written, very romantic

I wish my first time had been like that. The guy got me wet, penetrated, broke my hymen pumped a couple of times then was done. I think that's all I got for 46 years. At least he let her have an orgasm.

Your stories make my clit so hard

To the girl with the hard clit.

If your a good girl I'll lick your clit and pussy to repeated orgasms. If your a really good girl I'll give you repeated orgasms, AND make you squirt while you read his next story.

As for the story writer, keep up the great work that will also keep making her clit hard.

Short, sweet, simple. Loved it!

Well, It was not too realistic.

More a fantasy.

More a wishing, somewhat farfetched.

Maybe that's why it was so hot -- after all, who wants to read realistic humdrum?

Well-written with a minimum of English/grammar errors.

I thought the beginning was interesting as revealed his sexual temperature rising, and his sexual tension/frustration with it, as he depicted the female hotties around him and their effect on him. Revealing lascivious inner thoughts and feelings can contribute to an interesting Literotica read -- we like to know what's going on in other people's heads, especially if it's somewhat offbeat and/or erotic (like the protagonist).

My guess is that a good deal of why every woman around stirred him, was more him than them: "beauty is in the eye of the beholder."

Good read.

Short and to the point.

Paul in Oklahoma