All Comments on 'Paradigm Shift Ch. 03'

This character Matt certainly has the courage of his convictions ... Dumbest fuckhead in history !

Just a few technical comments. Near the beginning of the story you wrote "Cameron leaded into me.." Did you mean leaned? Also on page one you wrote "Eventually, the water eventually cooled, .... Duplication of "eventually"

Beginning of page two, he "had KC lay back". Should be "lie back". A bit later you had "every" for "ever" and "go" for "got".

Errors like that differentiate a 5 star story from a 3 or 4.

The whole storyline sucks...most of the husbands are cuckolds, they love watching their slut wives screwing around, and now Matt is going to be a submissive weak cuck because he's engaged to a nympho, she NEEDS strange cock every now and again...HA....but then again, all these MARRIED friends want Matt to fuck them with his marvellous sex skills that KC has been bragging about. So he's just as bad as her... Every character is awful and pathetic. 1 star