All Comments on 'Paradise Mom Ch. 01'

Her son did for his mother what most sons would do given the money and finance. But he took it futher, by buying a car taking her on a truip. Had any man did that to a single woman other than his mother, she would be all over him, fucking him to keep happy. But tpld in such a discriptive way, it became romantic. His taking charge of fucking his mother took another angle, when he stated he wanted her for his wife. Very interesting........will be waiting to see where you take us on this. Kudos

thats was one of the better mom son stories for a long time. keep it going

Loved it .So nice to her the story as told from a woman's point of view .Nice to know that they get turned on by the thought of incest as well . I wish more woman would write about their son's having intercourse with them . And taking the full load of her son's potent sexual discharge right into the depth's of her vagina .

The story flowed and progressed nicely. It was easy to see why he wanted her.

awesome! a great start to hopefully a great series.winning the lotto was a nice touch. now he and his mom, err soon to be wife? can have everything they desire.keep it between just the 2 of them for now. and maybe explore some anal activity between them. after all it's only incest when you've had anal with your mom. lmao

What a fantastic story, I'm on the edge waiting for the next part. I hope part 2 is just as wonderful.

Great story, I was so hard during your very graphic sex description and I had a great cum. Thank You!

I am really looking forward to reading more!

Tonny

I like the island theme. Would be interesting if those two naked girls mentioned in the story would re-appear later. Overall good story!

this excellent story is a depiction of almost all mom son fantasy lovers.

this will become one of the most popular stories in incest ever written

This tale is cliched, but not badly written.

Excellent writing! Loved it! It is a common theme that doesn't get old! The lottery winng was good input, and should let them live happily ever after! Looking forward to part 2!

Thanks for Writing!

Sexmate

It made me hard.

Wow -- this lady can write!

I liked everything about it; and agree with anonymous NYC that it would be wonderful if more moms wanted their sons as sex partners.

The story flowed nicely and became more of a turn on as it did because you could tell that the author has a solid brain ... and there's nothing sexier than a smart woman, IMHO.

Thanks!!

Thanks ! Mature Mom from Germany.

Marieluise

GREAT STORY

I LOVED THE STORY AND HAVE READ IT BEFORE ON XNXX ....BUT I WILL FINISH READING IT AGAIN

I love this and wish to have the same experience with my mother.

very good story. i also want my mum to let me fuck her like you have been fucked by your son.good well done keep it up

very good story. i also want my mum to let me fuck her like you have been fucked by your son.good well done keep it up

Well written, and the final climax of sex was wonderful. I wonder if Mommy gets fucked for the second time and gets pregnant again. I hope so!

The story was great, your build up was outstanding. The Lottery , The Island , Her Dream House. All for his Mother.Even though he wanted her, he knew how to treat her. And he treated her well . This was a very good read, it must keep going...LAROC OF AGES

That's William's mother talking as her boy fucks her for the first time in this great story. It's his first fuck and his mom's by far best fuck ever. I think this is a common experience for mothers who are smart enough to spread their legs for their son. They find that his wild boyish enthusiasm at getting his cock up between his mother's legs--actually plugging the same cunt he came out of--makes for the hottest fucks they've ever had. He slams and pounds his mother's mommy-hole with a frenzy, he can't believe where his cock is. Combine this with the fact that her boy's cock is the hardest cock around, rock-hard, and of course mom cums like crazy. Her boy's got a pair of hot young balls that never quit, they just keep on producing all that warm creamy semen that he's just got to unload all the time. Her own son's semen and his fierce urgency in unloading it excite the hell out of his mom, her cunt's leaking her juices down her legs and ass like a river. She confides her utter delight to her best friend, who goes and tries it with her own boy. That's how motherfucking spreads, and it's no surprise that the world is filling up with grinning young motherfuckers and their smiling, contented son-fucked moms. You probably know some of them yourself.

Some of which mean well, and others are well, mean.

I think your story was written well, not perfect but then you don't state that you are a accomplished author either.

I wish to encourage you to keep writing. I feel certain that I will enjoy Chapters 2, 3, and 4.

Thanks

Very good story keep posting like this

1. Love the dialogues between the characters.

2. the description of his sucking her nipples is erotic and good.

3. Good climax scene. You could even make the description more detailed. (Was his cock pressed against her cervix? etc.)

All in all, a very good read. Reminds me of Baron De Sade. And that's a compliment.

on to the next one.

i have no issue with incest

but, the mother clearly said "no" a few times at the start of the night.

that she gave in later only encourages arseholes and rapists to say "see, if you persist, they are all sluts, so just keep going ..."

sick!

"Paradise Mom Ch.01" - Thirty-three Year Old, Fertile Never Married Mother, Unnamed and Eighteen Year Old Virile Virgin Son, William

The uniqueness of this mother and son, romantic love story, is that Mother has only fucked ONCE in her life, a "quicky" when she was impregnated at fifteen years old, the result was the birth of her son, William. Her son eighteen year old son, William is still is still a virgin, never had sex due to never having dated. William's mother has known no other man in her life--except for her virgin son.

William is young, virile and knows very little about sex or women, other than the normal, close mother and son relationship. William occasionally plays the lottery, now that he's graduated high school and has a summer construction job, where he makes good money, and it helps with their finances to having things they could never afford before.

He wins an extremely large lottery, finally tells his mother...and he treats her to some pampering, a new car and a lavish vacation. William's adolescent, virile libido leads him to getting passionate with his mother. She reluctantly cedes to his advances of foreplay, finally entices his mother to their first fuck...which she needs, finally wants and enjoys multiple orgasms. But afterwards, she feels some mother-guilt and vows to have a mother-son conversation about what they've done.

Writer 'Brooke30' has written an excellent story, the Mother/Son subject being the ultimate for a mother and son's affair, developing due to their love, respect and ensuing romance. The uniqueness of mother's once only sexual encounter at fifteen (15) years old, and her son never having never had even one (1) sexual encounter! His mother has never had a lover, nor male companionship; at her young, fertile yearning age she is ripe for fulfilling her female urges and desires. The is a story that ANY male will love; I'm inspired by the writer's ability to write such an excellent story, the visions and vividness are thorough and carries from word to word to word The character's roles are perfect, flawless and enticing. It gets my cook-blood boiling!!!

Was good until it turns into rape. This is wrong.

you don't seem to understand the use or purpose of tags. Just taking a character name and adding a verb after it? Why??