All Comments on 'Parental Control'

Hard to follow sometimes was he dreaming or just crazy

MOERE CHAPTERS PLEASE

Up to your usual standards, he is going to have find a way to navigate that fog.

Sounds like you were listening to the soundtrack to Heavy Metal, hmm? I remember it well, and I'm especially fond of Stevie Nicks' "Blue Lamp".

Would have been better if you'd have asked someone to look it over....

Another wonderful story .You always come up with something different and unexpected. You lock the reader in and take them on a wild ride .Thank you for the great story .I am already looking forward to the next one .

I was watching the movie, well, it was playing in the background as i wrote that particular part. I was going for a Twilight Zone / Outer Limits kind of vibe. It has some possibilities or could end here. I am glad it is doing so well. Thanks everyone!! I have broken 3100 followers and that is all thanks to you.

It's no longer a twist.

To answer the question asked at the end,

no, it wasn't his home

It was an identical twin.

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I'm already a fan of your stories, this one out shines the others by leaps and bounds. please continue this arc it has potential to be great. and i do agree with others it would be nice if you had someone proof read your story before you upload it. there were enough word errors to make it glaring, things like she instead of he, or home instead of him, yes those are actual examples.

Whatever this is (calling it a story is a joke), it reads like it was written by a10 year old on a serious sugar overdose.

Don't let all those negative comments get u down u write really good stories I have a couple of them favorites keep it up

What started out as an erotic incest story turned into so much more. Parallel Universe? Alternate Reality? The possibilities are limitless. Can't wait for the next chapter. Please continue, I really want to see where this goes.

I eagerly await each new story. There are no 5's in my world, I gave you a 4, if I could have given you a 4.5 I would have. Great work, good to see new things from you!

You, FinalStand and BurntRedStone come up with some of the best and most twisted erotica. Love it! I hope you continue this story arc.

You've written an interesting story I can't wait to read the continuation of it

i do hope you continue this story, liked it very much

I liked this story but if you don't finish it then you deserve a 1, unless you died.

Confusing and severely twisted. 5 stars for imagination.