All Comments on 'Part of the Crew'

Great story well written Could not stop reading kept me mesmerized the entire time. Very hot story hope to see more soon.

In part 2 she should become the crew cum slut. Fuck and suck them all. And what happens on the boat stays on the boat.

Really expected there to be a gangbang, maybe chapter 2?

So good and so hot! Please write a part 2. It would be wonderful if you included the crew.

Your story; your fantasy, but even in that world, I would have expected a mutiny by a disappointed crew: A fishing season with relief, followed by a dry one, with no explanation. Not happy after 3--4 months!!!

It was difficult to really imagine how all of the parts fit together in such a small space.

The "Glory Curtain" was an interesting idea, but I would have thought blow jobs would have ensued.

Rank has it's privileges but I would have expected a mutiny. Maybe the guys just took care of themselves. Yeah, right, that must be what happened, yeah...

Wow, very hot story and I like the realism you bring to it. I hope there's a sequel! The daddy/daughter relationship is so perfect here.

Good premise, I liked the way it started, and would have liked more sexy time with the crew.

I liked it a lot. Very hot. Needs editing though.

Cool story. Nice premise and build up. I really liked how she was taking care of the crew, and was hoping she would continue doing that as well.

Definitely think she should have ended up the crew fucktoy instead of just being with the dad. Pretty disappointed we didn't get that. Would have been pretty hot.