All Comments on 'Part of The Procedure? Ch. 08'

I love your story telling. Thanks for sharing.

This is a very enjoyable series?

But there is one thing that bothers me? It's that you use some many question marks? Even when you are making a statement that isn't a question? You know?

I know you have many other stories to consider, but a follow-up here would be nice.

I like how you have Dan questioning his feelings of jealousy. He portends to be liberal and to be understanding, which he is, but at the same time he is burdened with the crap of a lifetime bombarded with society's puritanical sexual bullshit.

My only suggestion is to provide a note as to where to find the continuation of this story.

Good ending to the story.