All Comments on 'Partner Games Ch. 07: Joan Plays'

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Sex4lf57Sex4lf57almost 5 years ago

Very hot! Oh to be a horny college student again! Five stars and a favorite point!

prinnaveaprinnaveaalmost 5 years ago
College Days

Unfortunately I missed those. Nice chapter, well, so far all the chapters. The last two seem to be lean into incestuous fantasies. Although not my cup of tea, per se, but well done.

There were some grammatical errors, that were distracting, but not bad. It is a long chapter.

I gave this 5*, it flowed well, and was written well. It kept my motor running. lol

I will be waiting, patiently. :))

TopazThornTopazThornalmost 5 years ago
Loved it

To me this was great, can't wait to see what is next ( hopping for some story's with Joan and Bill together with another couple). Thank You

paulsmith2019paulsmith2019almost 5 years ago
Fun story

Enjoyed but like another reviewer wrote, I miss Bill and Joan together. Are they still together? Talking about this stuff? What effect is it having on their relationship? Do they want to be with each other anymore? Just wondering. . .

nyteramblernyteramblerabout 3 years ago

I liked the story and all the chapters one after the other. Was disappointed to find out there weren't more and since it is over 2 years since this one probably won't be more though would love to see what came next and to so how there marriage is doing when they are togther. Only thing that has bugged me since first chapter is that what they are doing was never talked about. Went from no messing around to wife bringing in another woman that during the story showed she had played with each other. Kept me scratching my head why hubby didn't talk to her about the changes in her clothes before that. I did enjoy the story otherwise very much. Specially seeing as I am over 60 lol

FseriesFseriesalmost 2 years ago

Definitely time to get her to stop or divorce her. This is way out of their marriage vows. Plus she technically really cheated on her husband behind his back with Sue.

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