by BigginBen810
While you had a nice little story there, I have to wonder about the title. Perhaps yo don't know, but that is the title of one of the most iconic series ever on this site. VertigoJ was the author and just abandoned the story about ten years ago, after he had promised readers he would tell them when the time was up. When you use that title, you raise the hopes of many readers who thought he had finally come back to do so. Nice little tale, nonetheless.