All Comments on 'Party of Four Plus Two More'

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don87654don87654over 17 years ago
Good reading!

What an erotic situation!

JackRoyalJackRoyalover 17 years ago
Not bad

A tad unrealistic, I admit, but who says fantasies need to be realistic anyway? I dug the basic story, with the guy getting 3 women each of different ethnicites, all @ once. But I would've left out the part with the other dude coming in and getting a bj from one of the gals. I like the idea of one guy have all the women for himself better. Plus, the part & the end with with Crystal's sister was fine, until she started worring about getting pregnent. That could mess up everything. But, basically, it was good.

phoenix23ninjaphoenix23ninjaover 8 years ago
Wow

I would love to experience this girls, interested?

phoenix23ninja@gmail.com

Email me if you want to make this happen

By the way i dont check email that often

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